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Sghytm90 [2012-03-25 08:26:24 +0000 UTC]
It sets the strangeness up well, I think, and keeping us in Izumi's place makes it easy to keep the reader in suspense.
There were many mistakes with grammar here.
Is Ushio named after Tetsu Ushio from Yu-Gi-Oh!?
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Sghytm90 In reply to Lord0Slayer [2012-03-25 20:26:35 +0000 UTC]
All right. Those are very similar characters.
Such a useful literary device.
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Lord0Slayer In reply to Sghytm90 [2012-03-25 23:03:48 +0000 UTC]
Indeed, it is.
Less than you think, but I can't go into detail just yet. ^_^
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