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Published: 2015-06-15 23:36:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 192782; Favourites: 3613; Downloads: 0
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“Wait, Cupcake, wait! Don’t go! Please, Cuppy!”


“I...Momma, my train is leaving in five minutes.”


“What you’re doing-this is crazy! And not the good kind of crazy!” Pinkie Pie nearly sobbed, “The bad kind! I know Pandora’s gonna be a princess soon, and I know you wanna train to become her knight-but Cuppy, sweetie, please! There’s a difference between being a friend, and...and agreeing to follow somepony into Celestia knows what! You could be hurt! Or ki...kill...” Pinkie swallowed, turning pale. She could barely stomach the word, let alone say it. Her watery blue eyes turned to her daughter again, imploring. “Please, don’t leave!”


“This isn’t really about Panny, Mom. I...it was my decision to join the Royal Military. I can’t stay in Ponyville anymore.” Cupcake glanced away, shuffling her hooves.


Pinkie Pie recoiled as if physically struck. “But why? You have everything here-a family that loves you, friends that support you, and...and...and you’re the best baker our town has!”


Cupcake’s eyes widened. For her mother to actually concede baking superiority to her daughter...After their years of heated rivalry at the Annual Canterlot Bake-off, the tearful admission shook Cupcake to her core. She tried to compose herself.


“I...Momma...that’s just it. My life here is wonderful with you and Dad and PB and J, but...I feel like I’m missing out on a greater part of my destiny.” Resolve entered Cupcake’s eyes. “There has to be more to me than just baking cupcakes, Momma. There just has to be.”


“I don’t understand, Cuppy.” Pinkie’s mane was rapidly deflating, and her eyes glistened. She looked utterly miserable. It made Cupcake’s throat grow tight.


She ran forward and enveloped her mother in a tight hug. “I’m not asking you to understand,” She whispered, hating the feeling of moisture prickling at her own eyes, “But I need you to know that I’m sorry.”


The train whistle’s wail pierced the air. Cupcake pulled away from Pinkie. “I have to go now. I love you, my Mommy Pie.” Pinkie Pie reached a fumbling hoof out to her daughter, weak with grief. Cupcake steeled herself, turning away.


“Goodbye, Mom.”

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and then Pinkie didn't see her daughter again for two years
all of Pinkie's concerns are legitimate, the Equestrian military is very unforgiving to small, shy earth pony mares, and Cupcake would break many bones and be pitted against stallions three times her size in combat practice and be completely run through the wringer and just, in Cupcake's own words, "be broken apart to be made stronger"

Even though her time in the army was rough, Cupcake eventually gained inner peace and learned to tap into her own immense physical and emotional strength

But those first few months without her daughter were very hard for Pinkie...so much so that she came to blame Pandora (understandable), and there was some heavy tension between the Sparkle family and the Pie family for a while that took some time to diffuse

shout out to for suggesting this nifty bit of headcanon
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Comments: 291

ColonelBSacquet [2015-07-24 22:47:16 +0000 UTC]

Pandora, blamed? Why? Did she ask Cupcake to be her bodyguard?

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newflutterpie In reply to ColonelBSacquet [2015-08-06 08:46:31 +0000 UTC]

Because Pandora is a princess and she would need knights just as any other princess. And if I remember correctly Lop once made a picture with Cupcake as a knight for Pandora.

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JeannieHobbes In reply to ??? [2015-07-24 05:55:39 +0000 UTC]

Why U make me want to steal your concepts?

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malis22 In reply to ??? [2015-07-23 23:52:31 +0000 UTC]

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A11yrold [2015-07-23 17:10:18 +0000 UTC]

My honey nut feelios....NUUUUUU

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whitecarousels In reply to A11yrold [2015-07-25 01:26:45 +0000 UTC]

lol

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RosieRoseK [2015-07-23 06:48:32 +0000 UTC]

SO SAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
       

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Yammers05 [2015-07-22 22:51:25 +0000 UTC]

 this is really sad..

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Miss-Plain-Jane [2015-07-20 08:44:48 +0000 UTC]

It's be interesting to see some pics of the tensions between the Pie and Sparkle family.

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tsukimichandesu [2015-07-20 08:42:28 +0000 UTC]

     

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Aethon056 [2015-07-20 01:30:37 +0000 UTC]

*Reads the first two lines of description*

Nope! Can't read this, not gonna do it, don't want to cry.
I love the pic, though. Nice work.

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AllicornzAreAwesome [2015-07-18 21:05:53 +0000 UTC]

poor pinkie :'c

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ClopinStarchbopper [2015-07-17 18:50:42 +0000 UTC]

Aww!

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marinus18 In reply to ??? [2015-07-17 11:36:55 +0000 UTC]

Pinkie Pie also left her home to do something completely different and she was actually even younger than her daughter is now.

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EnderFoxyGirl [2015-07-16 17:55:13 +0000 UTC]

aww..... So sad...
This remainds me of my siblings who are in the military

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wilnet1tractor [2015-07-16 15:45:04 +0000 UTC]

Resembles Cheese Sandwich.

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Graven-Imaging [2015-07-14 16:47:45 +0000 UTC]

When you go off to the military, you do not come back the same.

Pinkie's losing her innocent little girl forever. One way or another.

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TXCleverGirls In reply to ??? [2015-07-14 04:09:21 +0000 UTC]

This is great! The look on Pinkie's truly shows how distraught she is. You're really good at conveying emotion into your work!

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BlazeNekoFox [2015-07-13 11:32:11 +0000 UTC]

Twi must been pracked a lot after this X3

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CreepyWarriorPony [2015-07-11 20:20:59 +0000 UTC]

-has a box of Kleenex tissues-

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Vepkhia [2015-07-11 00:43:24 +0000 UTC]

So sweet

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urzapw2000 [2015-07-09 20:18:09 +0000 UTC]


but she looks good in a uniform...

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MugenSeiRyuu [2015-07-09 14:19:17 +0000 UTC]

Well, I guess spending 2 years in the army is still better than spending two years with Pinkie Pie.

Sgt. Bucker: How tall are you, recruit? Three? I was unaware they stacked horseapples that high. Okay, everyone! Listen! I expect to lose half of you before I'm finished. I will use every means necessary - fair and unfair - to trip you up, to expose your weaknesses as a potential warrior! Can also someone finally get that pink mare over there to shut up or do I have knock out her myself?

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newflutterpie In reply to MugenSeiRyuu [2015-10-11 20:43:10 +0000 UTC]

I'm guessing you hate Pinkie.

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MugenSeiRyuu In reply to newflutterpie [2015-10-11 20:57:40 +0000 UTC]

Well, when one is introduced to the series via "Griffon the brush off" and "Luna Eclipsed"....although she was surprisingly helpful in "Lost Treasure of Griffonstone".

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newflutterpie In reply to MugenSeiRyuu [2016-01-28 01:29:07 +0000 UTC]

I can see how she was a dick in Luna Eclipsed, but even if she was a little insistent in GtBO, Gilda committed thievery, did property damage, and tried to manipulate Dash.

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MugenSeiRyuu In reply to newflutterpie [2016-01-28 16:06:07 +0000 UTC]

It wouldn't even haver come that far if it was not for Pinkie in the first place. She would have stayed out of Ponyville.

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newflutterpie In reply to MugenSeiRyuu [2016-01-30 23:00:33 +0000 UTC]

So Gilda scared Granny and stole because Pinkie was Rainbow's friend? And she came to Ponyville because she wanted to hangout with Dash, so, Pinkie had nothing to do with Gilda's visit. And Gilda overreacted. Pinkie simply wanted to have fun and be better friends with Dash. And let us not forget: Dash did want to hangout with Pinkie after hanging out with Gilda. Gilda kept going out of her way to keep Dash away. And an old friend having a new on is not a reason to rude and mean to the new one.

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MugenSeiRyuu In reply to newflutterpie [2016-01-31 07:57:57 +0000 UTC]

Actually she only came to visit Dash, who is living away from Ponyville, in her cloud house. They did not go into Ponyville until after Pinkie annoyed them. Given what we know about Gilda & Griffons from the show, and also from Mythology, it is no surprise that it does not go well. Also Pinkie being a pain in the ass. Gilda scaring Granny smith was just for fun. You may notice that the episode started with playing pranks.

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newflutterpie In reply to MugenSeiRyuu [2016-02-01 00:35:40 +0000 UTC]

Do you not know that in order to hangout, somebody has to visit another person (or pony/griffon in this case). And while Pinkie did annoy Gilda, she went to Ponyville because she would get bored in Dash's house without the latter there. Also, even if Pinkie (nervously) put scaring Granny off as a prank, scaring Celestia-knows-how-old-ponies is horrible.You may also notice Gilda commited a crime for no reason but the plot demands it.

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MooshiMoshiDA [2015-07-08 23:22:11 +0000 UTC]

Aww I'd like to see more of this!

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ABrightSide [2015-07-07 05:51:38 +0000 UTC]

"For her mother to actually concede baking superiority to her daughter...After their years of heated rivalry at the Annual Canterlot Bake-off...", was I supposed to laugh there? Because I did. And in the middle of a sad story.

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General5 [2015-07-07 01:27:44 +0000 UTC]

*Sniff* Oh god... so hearth touching. Well done!

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SilkyBell [2015-07-03 18:43:14 +0000 UTC]

It's so touching and heartbreaking... I love how you showed Pinkie not just as some stupid crazy girl, but as actual belivable and mature character. Her feels are so real, and I feel so sorry for her. Bravo, Lopoddity, bravo.

P.S. Love how you drew her curls.

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Lopoddity In reply to SilkyBell [2015-07-06 06:18:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!  

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MautheDog In reply to ??? [2015-07-02 06:32:01 +0000 UTC]

who are you? why are you so good at drawing? why is this so amazing? where do i find moar?

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Blue83dragon In reply to ??? [2015-06-30 20:36:51 +0000 UTC]


I have something in my eye, tears, lots and lots of tears, because I'm crying

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spicyteacup In reply to ??? [2015-06-29 14:20:57 +0000 UTC]

Ouch! Right in the feels!

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Mickeymonster In reply to ??? [2015-06-29 08:43:09 +0000 UTC]

I FUCKING LOVE PINKIE'S MANE HERE, sDFVSDKLFGHDSKLFGJSDFLKJSDKGLDJG

Byoutifully done~

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Lopoddity In reply to Mickeymonster [2015-06-29 15:01:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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SnapCentino [2015-06-28 21:36:23 +0000 UTC]

You know, with all this military stuff, I am continually surprised at Cupcake's cutie mark.

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Lopoddity In reply to SnapCentino [2015-06-29 15:01:33 +0000 UTC]

Exactly. It's entirely ordinary, but Cupcake is anything but.

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SnapCentino In reply to Lopoddity [2015-06-29 15:38:28 +0000 UTC]

cool

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SilverStripes740 [2015-06-27 09:07:39 +0000 UTC]

You should be a fanfic writer. You're fanart is great but have you ever considered story writing?

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Lopoddity In reply to SilverStripes740 [2015-06-27 22:02:03 +0000 UTC]

I do write fics.
Lopoddity's Secret Fics!    I'm so excited you all expressed an interest in viewing my writing. Lately I've started writing my own Pandoraverse fics, and they've been piling up in my stash. I'm gonna share em, but be warned, I'm a hack. XD Feedback is greatly appreciated! Without further ado:
  "Pages and Pancakes" Set in the humanverse. Pandora is in love with her minion, Cupcake. She has been for many years. But that's okay, she's fine keeping that painful little secret bottled up, if it means preserving their friendship. Unfortunately, a catalyst event leads to Cupcake learning of Pan's secret feelings. Deals with the aftermath. Kind of a feels roller coaster. Warning for some suggestive content and adult language
  "Grey Skies" Drabble. Set in the ponyverse. Explores the brief fling between teenage Pandora and Bruce. Bruce/Pandora shipping, obviously, but really more of a study of a fairly dysfunctional relati Even more Lopoddity ficsIt's like a crazy train that's off the tracks, I just can't stop writing. More Pandoraverse fics from me. Just three this time.
  "Worst Rescue Ever" When Aerostorm and Cupcake are kidnapped by a malevolent, magical being, Bruce and Pandora are forced to team up to rescue the ponies nearest and dearest to them. Will the two rivals be able to overcome their differences long enough to work together? ...No. No, they won't. Worst rescue ever. Features Bruce/Aero shipping and Pandora/Cupcake shipping
"Mistake" Set in the humanverse, exploring a what-if alt future where Bruce and Pandora remained together past their teen years. Bruce/Pandora shipping, obviously. Short and sad. Mild suggestive content and adult language
"Homecoming" Ponyverse, set somewhat in the future, after Pan and Cupcake have had Oddball. Cupcake's military involvement sees her stationed overseas

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Apalority [2015-06-24 22:19:31 +0000 UTC]

No i'm not crying

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Teliki In reply to Apalority [2015-07-03 04:29:58 +0000 UTC]

I'm right there with ya

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DragonTurtle2 In reply to ??? [2015-06-22 18:58:22 +0000 UTC]

I don't think Cupcake is going to do anything more dangerous than what Pinkie's done in the show... and at least she'll get armor.

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TheSaucySergal [2015-06-22 13:32:53 +0000 UTC]

Holy shit...That's...Wow..*wipes away tears*

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marchy96 In reply to ??? [2015-06-22 09:28:17 +0000 UTC]

WHY YOU MAKE ME CRY?! TT^TT
reading your post was just heart-wrenching, it was coiling all my heart-strings! I CHOKED!! I literally choked!! I've never choked on a dialogue before. . .  It felt good!! Sometimes I feel like a sadist, but what's a story without a little crying right?
I believe a great artist/writer has to know how to make the audience/reader feel moved and understand that reality has both tears and joy ^^ wonderful work!! I love this one, and thanks! Sometimes a good cry does us well ;D

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