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Published: 2008-03-29 16:44:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 1221; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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HOW LONG HAZ IT BIN?//

Uni just had a one week mid semester break, and now is the Sunday morning before coming back D.

So here's my manga's leading girl! SHE AZN

I thought that there were too many of the stereotypical black haired cutesy heroines.. soooo I always try for her to look less cutesy and more.. cool. I tried, but she still doesn't look cool enough.
Guess next time I draw her she needs to have her eyes a little sharper... but then she would look like a baby Yamamoto [link] , not that there's anything wrong with that. I like Yamamoto.

The outfit? Don't ask. But I draw too many shirts and pants ._. So yeah.. time for a change

Let's see... besides the left arm on her full-body, which looks quite retarded, I can't really pick out anything obvious.. so if there's something out of place please tell me! :\

She's missing a key item on this pic. And that headdress probably wouldn't stick in reality. ANDS NEEDS TOS DRAWS MORES CURVES , NOMNOMS.

Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm kinda liked the last hairdo I gave her here [link] cuz it's prettier :< but it's a [censored] to draw so rather stick to good ol' straight hair! Besides, now I can use the previous for another design.

Ohh mah gawd I can see the weirdness in that pic so clearly now! ahahahahahhahh ohhhh my...

Asasaki Yukie 朝咲雪え, referred to as 'Shala' by her close friends. She was adopted by an old man who at that time recently came through the loss of his wife. As a young girl she was found sleeping in the woods at winter, half buried by snow. The man named her for her appearance and this first encounter. She is undeterred by the cold, and loves the rain.

Height: 165 cm
Hair colour: Jet black
Eye colour: Dark blue, with silver patches around the pupils

Oh, Google translate's translation of her name isn't half bad.. I was thinking of 'bloom' instead of 'flowering' though.

Others so far:
Shiou Kyoji [link] (Hahaha look at the tall looking man. He's not really that tall.)

Character (C) me

You've already seen these two quite often, but next up (and the rest) should be someone I only ever referenced :>
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Comments: 26

Frutillas [2009-07-01 03:39:00 +0000 UTC]

Your style for drawing (this picture) looks like the one used for that manga 'No Bra'. (My friend reads it. )

It's still a really, really cute picture!
Though I don't really see how the arm looks retarded. 9_9

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Looneh In reply to Frutillas [2009-07-04 04:13:49 +0000 UTC]

Well if you don't see the retardation then I'm happy XD

Haha, I've read some chapters of No Bra before. Honestly speaking... I just don't know how to feel about it 8D;;

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Frutillas In reply to Looneh [2009-07-04 15:32:43 +0000 UTC]

I've honestly never read it past the first page of some chapter. My friend has an addiction to cute-boy manga things.

You're style is still cool, though.

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miscellaneous-me [2008-11-04 21:45:42 +0000 UTC]

awww this is really good nice work. ^__^

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Looneh In reply to miscellaneous-me [2008-11-05 03:22:37 +0000 UTC]

hahaha, thanks ms. miscellaneous

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miscellaneous-me In reply to Looneh [2008-11-05 14:02:48 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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haro-x [2008-08-10 04:49:55 +0000 UTC]

This is really good. I'm glad she's also entering the OC tournament...

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Looneh In reply to haro-x [2008-08-10 12:32:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, but this isn't the real ref sheet I'll be using

I'm really looking forward to next week 8D

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mellowgellowdi [2008-08-02 13:24:13 +0000 UTC]

waaaa kerennn
^^
tapi gambarnya kayak ichigo 100%
ya..

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Looneh In reply to mellowgellowdi [2008-08-02 21:52:18 +0000 UTC]

Iya euy.. gambaran mizuki kawashita memang inspirasi aku sih xP

..karena itu juga karakter ini kadang2 keliatan kayak si toujou >_<

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mellowgellowdi In reply to Looneh [2008-08-03 12:24:06 +0000 UTC]

owwwwwwwwwwwww
'.'

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Rocha3D [2008-03-30 16:30:46 +0000 UTC]

Coolio! I like her...
The only thing I didn't like much in the drawing was the short she was using... its all straight, no curves at all !

Great overall

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Looneh In reply to Rocha3D [2008-03-31 10:22:06 +0000 UTC]

straight shorts? Is that weird? o_o..

I'm guessing you meant it looks flat because my shading is off. But then again, you may be commenting on the design itself or even the angle it's shot at ^_^;

maybe you can extend that comment a little.. ill give you a cookie

but thanks for the comment

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Rocha3D In reply to Looneh [2008-04-02 00:41:52 +0000 UTC]

hmmm I mean... the hip lines doesnt show the tiniest bit...

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Looneh In reply to Rocha3D [2008-04-02 07:56:09 +0000 UTC]

um well, her hip is actually under her shirt, which also covers the top part of her shorts where her hip line would be. The parts of the shorts you can see are just dangling from the hips and don't converge, so even if it were her thighs.. i didnt think it would curve unless the shorts are slightly elastic o_oa

but i do see what you mean-- I oughta define her curves a little more over there regardless, and might fix it when I can. It will look better. Thanks for bringing that up

Or maybe I might just re-submit her naked

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Rocha3D In reply to Looneh [2008-04-05 21:26:03 +0000 UTC]

EUHAiehIAuhIAEHAuei YEAH NAKED !
But yeah, no problem! Maybe just a tiny slight curve is enough !!

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Sahara-chan [2008-03-30 02:54:20 +0000 UTC]

What a beautiful character! Cute clothes too.

I really like the profile view of her. The way you drew her hair looks great.

You have an awsume style, and it reminds me of something... can't remember what though.

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Looneh In reply to Sahara-chan [2008-03-31 10:43:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I guess practice helps ^__^

My style is actually an attempt at another style by my favourite mangaka, Kawashita Mizuki, though maybe that's not what you had in mind..?

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Sahara-chan In reply to Looneh [2008-03-31 19:39:40 +0000 UTC]

Maybe, I don't even know. xD

Point is that it's really good, and I like it alot. Lol.

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Looneh In reply to Sahara-chan [2008-04-02 08:05:56 +0000 UTC]

here's some cake to show my appreciation

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Sahara-chan In reply to Looneh [2008-04-02 18:43:09 +0000 UTC]

Lol, thanks.

Om nom nom nom.

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CinnamoonAkia [2008-03-29 22:52:43 +0000 UTC]

Shes pretty .>

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Looneh In reply to CinnamoonAkia [2008-03-31 10:52:40 +0000 UTC]

Enough about that. I'm quite taken in by that shrub of random plants

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CinnamoonAkia In reply to Looneh [2008-03-31 22:19:26 +0000 UTC]

You do realize that shrub is going out with that flying monkey over there dont you?

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Looneh In reply to CinnamoonAkia [2008-04-02 08:07:28 +0000 UTC]

...

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CinnamoonAkia In reply to Looneh [2008-04-02 22:09:58 +0000 UTC]

the cake is a lie.

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