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Published: 2013-02-05 19:13:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 586; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 0
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Description '... Some say in Ice'

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Trade with the lovely =Skaylez :3
His OC Nero 8D
Took me quite a while to be honest XD
Anatomy fail !!

Hope you like it and that I got it right :3

--Edit 3.3.2013--
I lost the PSD file -_-


Texture © *d1sarmon1a
To/For, Nero © =Skaylez
All else © *lonepaws
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Comments: 39

fearlessfrisbee [2013-02-06 00:22:02 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


This is amazing the background and attention to detail is super rad okay!and the shading is amazing as well i love the hands and the arms .The only suggestion i would have was move nero closer to the edge it looks like hes floating sort of.
but over all this is stunning great job!! : )
now immma just say rad because like i need more words
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lonepaws In reply to fearlessfrisbee [2013-02-06 16:22:07 +0000 UTC]

asjhvdkaUYDSCV thankyouuuu :'D
Imma change it cause for once I saved a PSD file xD <3

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fearlessfrisbee In reply to lonepaws [2013-02-07 00:38:28 +0000 UTC]

haha kay X)

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blackmustang13 [2013-02-08 01:33:46 +0000 UTC]

ohh I love it *u*

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lonepaws In reply to blackmustang13 [2013-02-08 08:07:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you c:

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Sarskutti [2013-02-06 09:40:58 +0000 UTC]

have you watched twilight??
anyways its cool!

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lonepaws In reply to Sarskutti [2013-02-06 16:23:37 +0000 UTC]

Yes why ? XD
Thank you

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Sarskutti In reply to lonepaws [2013-02-07 11:19:12 +0000 UTC]

well i remember that in the beging of the third twilight, Bella said that; "some say that the world will end in fire, some say in ice."
Ofcourse there's nothing wrong with it, i've watched twilights too, but i was just wondering.
XD

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lonepaws In reply to Sarskutti [2013-02-07 16:31:15 +0000 UTC]

ohh XD I just got it off the internet XD

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Sarskutti In reply to lonepaws [2013-02-07 16:48:29 +0000 UTC]

haha.

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JamesPrat [2013-02-06 06:14:58 +0000 UTC]

i just can't stop smiling. I love, in particular, this may sound weird, his jaw line. You made him look real handsome Great work with the hair too. aosieubnoisuheirjfklasdfhvauijoklewAHSFDGSOIASDFJKF *stares at it for 3 more hours*

THANK YOU. I WOULD HUG YOU SO HARD RIGHT NOW.

I've drawn waffle like twice already but they both turned out horribly so I'm currently in the middle of retrying.

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lonepaws In reply to JamesPrat [2013-02-06 08:17:23 +0000 UTC]

Yay No problemo !
You know you were in my dream last night XD
I was in new york at 4am on a field next to houses and you were having a picnic with loads other people XD

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JamesPrat In reply to lonepaws [2013-02-07 22:29:21 +0000 UTC]

Oh that wasn't a dream. That was totally real life what did I look like in your dream??

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lonepaws In reply to JamesPrat [2013-02-08 08:08:42 +0000 UTC]

haha XD Uhm, you had the hat on c: And ... just like you looked in your photos XD

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JamesPrat In reply to lonepaws [2013-02-10 21:25:31 +0000 UTC]

oh so i looked cute obviously

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lonepaws In reply to JamesPrat [2013-02-10 21:28:14 +0000 UTC]

haha XXD

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JamesPrat In reply to lonepaws [2013-02-11 03:24:55 +0000 UTC]

eeeehhhh *attempts to hide comment*

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lonepaws In reply to JamesPrat [2013-02-11 08:14:31 +0000 UTC]

XDDXDX

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JamesPrat In reply to lonepaws [2013-02-11 20:32:21 +0000 UTC]

OH HEY I LIKE THIS PICTURE YOU DREW OF NERO BTW

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lonepaws In reply to JamesPrat [2013-02-11 20:35:50 +0000 UTC]

haha XD Thank you ? XD

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JamesPrat In reply to lonepaws [2013-02-11 20:52:59 +0000 UTC]

YEAH YOU WELCOME [link]

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lonepaws In reply to JamesPrat [2013-02-11 21:16:43 +0000 UTC]

XDXD Love that video
Brings back memories XD

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JamesPrat In reply to lonepaws [2013-02-12 06:07:12 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha. ikr.

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Eldenina [2013-02-05 23:42:30 +0000 UTC]

I like it! Nero looks like he's floating, though. Also, the anatomy in not bad, there's just something strange in his arm. One part of it looks bigger than the other. But I don't think that matters much.
I like the colors of it, especially nero's tail and the shadows in his pants.
The background is good, but doesn't fit in him (as I said before, he's floating somewhere, not there)
His position looks strange too, but that may be because he doesn't fit in the background.

But I love the ice-ish background, that's great and nice and bluee.

You could train the expression on his face too, and showing he has fur not only in his tail and hair.

I tried to do the critique >.< I know I go into the negative things more, but I hope this helped you :\

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lonepaws In reply to Eldenina [2013-02-06 16:26:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much
I'm gonna move him more to the water I hate the hand ;-; probably gonna change that too XD
With the fur in his face do you mean shade it to make it look more tufty ??
I'll try sort the arm xD It does look odd
With the background how do you think I could change it to suit the style I've drawn him in more ? I never know how to harmonise BG and Focus :c

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Eldenina In reply to lonepaws [2013-02-06 17:45:46 +0000 UTC]

First of all I have to say I'm not a specialist, this is only my amateur opinion. I fear of telling you bad suggestions and ruining something.

I don't think the hand is that bad, but if you prefer to do it better, go on
About the fur, I sorta wanted to see more fur in his body, like his chest, but I'm no furry specialist...


Well, about the background... it is too blurry, unfocused. It could be more focused, because the anthro has his lineart very fosused too, you see? At least the ground and the background that is near him. Try doing it all more focused and just near him, maybe.
(I'm no pro, so just, sorry I'm saying wrong suggestions >.<)
And you could do shades in the ground, so we could see he's not in a fake background just like a green screen (like this. this one is a good example of how our drawings shouldn't look [link] )

Well... try it if you want and see what looks better: if this one or the other one.

Wee I wish I helped you. You're welcome!

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lonepaws In reply to Eldenina [2013-02-06 17:56:58 +0000 UTC]

Noo your critiques are really useful !

My dad (who's a doctor and knows anatomy) told me it wasn't very natural ^^' Thats why I wanna change it XD
So fur like shading and more fur lines ? c:

Ah I see How could I go about making it more 'focused' ? Just add lines ?

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Eldenina In reply to lonepaws [2013-02-06 18:20:16 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I think it's adding lines.
And more fur lines and shading, yes ^^

(It seems nice to have a dad who helps in drawings xD)

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lonepaws In reply to Eldenina [2013-02-06 18:26:10 +0000 UTC]

haha xD oki I'll get to is ASAP ;3

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Eldenina In reply to lonepaws [2013-02-06 18:29:12 +0000 UTC]

And the shades in the ground!

(Psst, what is ASAP?)

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lonepaws In reply to Eldenina [2013-02-06 18:34:14 +0000 UTC]

Yus

As Soon As Possible ;D

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rainreader [2013-02-05 20:05:33 +0000 UTC]

this is cool... literally the anatomy is great don't worry about it

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lonepaws In reply to rainreader [2013-02-05 20:06:27 +0000 UTC]

thank you ;-; <3

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rainreader In reply to lonepaws [2013-02-05 20:09:06 +0000 UTC]

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TheCarmiBug [2013-02-05 19:44:30 +0000 UTC]

He looks awesome!

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lonepaws In reply to TheCarmiBug [2013-02-05 19:45:04 +0000 UTC]

thankchu :3

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TheCarmiBug In reply to lonepaws [2013-02-05 19:51:54 +0000 UTC]

No problem! and the anatomy is actually great!

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lonepaws In reply to TheCarmiBug [2013-02-05 19:55:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank youuuuuu :'D <3

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TheCarmiBug In reply to lonepaws [2013-02-05 20:25:02 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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