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PoisonGirl-sts [2010-01-24 16:42:46 +0000 UTC]

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I like the general composition and the colour tones a lot. This has been photographed really well, the glow to her skin is stunning, but I think you could have directed the model better. Her pose seems awkward and unnatural in a way that doesn't seem to fit with her expression (which I find quite dreary and unexciting... if it had been more 'fierce' then the pose would perhaps have worked for the awkwardness, or if the pose had been more casual/relaxed then perhaps the expression would have worked- but I find it a little conflicting).
I think this would have worked well as an emotive piece if you'd have instructed a certain emotion for her to portray, as her expression and body language just seems a little unintentionally lifeless.
However, as I said before- visually it has been captured very well; you've clearly learnt the knack to your camera and how to post process! I like the background texture and tones and how it contrasts with her smooth arms, and kudos for keeping the diagonal corner in at the bottom right, I think that balances out the writing to her left well... so good job on the photography side, but directing the subject could do with a little work e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Wink)" />
I like the contrast too, but would have liked if a few more of the lighter tones were perhaps picked out of her hair in post, as it merges with the top at the bottom and looks a little flat.
When photographing models I like to think of it as similar to the role of a movie director, trying to find a balance between visual impact and direction of the actor(s) to compliment the scene. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" />

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cactus1 [2010-05-26 14:03:26 +0000 UTC]

great ! l; )

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Nirelleth [2010-03-28 03:14:31 +0000 UTC]

This is pretty. Gorgeous work!

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mayat-s [2010-02-20 18:21:48 +0000 UTC]

WOW , beautiful

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KasparsBroks [2010-01-02 14:00:43 +0000 UTC]

Very beautiful model!!

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Grafilogika [2009-12-28 15:03:49 +0000 UTC]

WOW great model I love her eyes... look very stuning. Great job :>

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sa-photographs [2009-12-27 05:48:43 +0000 UTC]

Your photo was featured here in my latest journal!
[link]

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AShoreNeverReached [2009-12-11 18:33:31 +0000 UTC]

excellent shot. she's very beautiful!

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DemonicxxGirl [2009-11-26 14:35:14 +0000 UTC]

[link]

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mariquasunbird1 [2009-11-23 22:02:35 +0000 UTC]

Great shot

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DemonicxxGirl [2009-11-21 16:55:58 +0000 UTC]

хм, хубаво.
би й отивало с черна коса. :>

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