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Published: 2013-11-28 21:53:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 544; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 0
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never thought 'd be here stillthe show seemed ending
time had moved on
...then it went on
I sighed the device (false endings a literary choice I've felt a flaw since Lord of the Rings)
yet we remain at the storytellers mercy, so I waited
waited
this epilogue was inventive but repetitive and turned too mordant, the narrative had nothing left to say
til saying nothing seemed best
and thus ........
too much silence though is hard edge to a wish for more
so recently I've searched again for subtle shifts and chance to change the arc
trying to shape words disjointed by neglect into dialog
keeping the shadows where the sun put them
wondering if this could be, might continuation redeem cause
time tried patience fed need to know, folly of a fool
to envision is a fear and a toll on the soul
yet I asked ...
x -invocation, supplication - need not repeated- x
and was answered
in clear cold light by slow revolution of evolution,
the universe turned and
-
I've not slept well since
we are here in now though
and you I am always grateful for
as to my scene to be will what it will
for worth to try by due to all
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Light me up
Fill my soul
Carry me to it all
And again when you fall
I will be there to hold you on
carousels cannot call
for the children of the dawn
Darken clouds, lightning storm
spinning me, out of control
and she says "hold my hand"
and I will bring you out of the wind
Whisper softly, to us all
how your soul isn't whole
and remember when
the new was old- how the light never told
"hold him up" undo the untold
her instructions never cold
her hair will be
the rope that holds
you for always to this world
falling down
blinded soul
and she will be there
when the carousel calls
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The very earliest Greek mythlogisers recognised the sky itself as the Titan Uranus, who, with the earth principle Gaia, spawned the Titanic race. Maybe those early people lived under the huge skies of the Central European plains,before their migrations took them to their Mediterranean paradise.
Certainly these clouds could be called Titanic.
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my reply to this ran into pages (which I may try post w later submission)
suffice it to say I much agree with your theory of these plains
and as mentioned before the keen perception you have makes wish I could show the full force and power in these moments
the sound and motion, more of the whole experience
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It's always good to try, but we must recognise that experience will always beggar description!
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An attempt is as important as the success.
No matter the mood of the sky, there is always beauty in it.
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