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Description "I miss you."

"I miss you, too."

"How long has it been?"

"Only a week. How's the internship?"

"Boring, but I'm learning a lot. I want to come home. I miss you."

"Is the weather in Phoenix nice?"

"No, it's too hot. I miss you."

"Are you having fun, at least?"

"Not really. I miss you."

"I miss you, too, but I thought we already established that."

"I know. It just...feels like half of my body is back home, sleeping in bed next to you."

"I just looked under the covers. Nothing's there, I promise."

"You know what I meant."

"You're right, I do. I'll let you in on a secret, though."

"Shoot."

"I'll be gone one day, and you'll be alone."

"Wow, some secret..."

"No, listen. Right now, there are seven billion people on the planet. Some had their funerals today. Some got married. Some had birthday parties and so on and so on. Out of all the planets, solar systems, galaxies, and universes still unknown to mankind, we met each other. Out of everybody, I chose you and you chose me."

"What's your point?"

"My point, I guess, is that everything is very small. We're microscopic. No one even knows I'm talking to you right now. Hardly anyone knows who we are. One day, I'll die, and when I do, no one will care except for you."

"Stop saying things like that, you're upsetting me."

"Hold on. One day I'll be dead, but you'll care, and that's enough for me. You understand? And I want you to know that when you die, too, we'll be together. In heaven, or valhalla, or eternal darkness, or whatever comes next. I will personally sit on a fence post next to the gates of hell and wait for your arrival, so we can step in together."

"You're getting tired, aren't you? You always get poetic when you're tired."

"That's besides the point. I'm always going to be next to you, right by your side. And I know that I'd never want to have anybody kiss me unless that person was you... and I know that everything in life is temporary, but I'd take a lifetime of two minutes if it meant I got to have you in it. And eventually it will come to pass that time and distance and countries have fallen and crumbled into the sands of nothingness, and I will still be standing in whatever's left with an arm outstretched, reaching for you."

"What are you trying to say?"

"I don't know. I guess I just miss you."
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Comments: 52

littleblueraccoon In reply to ??? [2015-01-26 18:16:30 +0000 UTC]

I like the thought of that thank you so much!Β 

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Chiolla [2014-09-14 13:04:30 +0000 UTC]

" I will personally sit on a fence post next to the gates of hell and wait for your arrival, so we can step in together." Pretty touching part Really enjoyed reading

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littleblueraccoon In reply to Chiolla [2015-01-26 18:17:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! I'm glad!

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Chiolla In reply to littleblueraccoon [2015-01-26 19:21:09 +0000 UTC]

YouΒ΄re very welcome

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DSteffi [2014-09-14 10:16:48 +0000 UTC]

"I'd take a lifetime of two minutes if it meant I got to have you in it."


I want to tell this to someone. But I'm not the person he wants to hear it from.Β 


Beautiful, beautiful work.

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littleblueraccoon In reply to DSteffi [2015-01-26 18:17:44 +0000 UTC]

Save all of your love and your beautiful words for someone who will appreciate them and send them to you in return. Thank you so much!

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Bohax [2014-08-27 11:37:23 +0000 UTC]

Wow... it is really beautiful and moving... I don't think it needs a critique. I think that it explains itself and its power is only intrinsic; nothing can be added with out the original intention that drove it from your mind, into your hands, onto the keyboard, and then here. I hope that doesn't sound, 'preachy' or 'higher-purpose' or 'meta' or anything

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littleblueraccoon In reply to Bohax [2014-08-31 04:37:03 +0000 UTC]

aw, thank you, truly~ It doesn't sound like that at all, it's very kind and i appreciate it.

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Bohax In reply to littleblueraccoon [2014-08-31 11:24:00 +0000 UTC]

Β 

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InsecureWriting [2014-08-14 15:31:51 +0000 UTC]

Lovely Β 

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littleblueraccoon In reply to InsecureWriting [2014-08-31 04:36:26 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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CelestialFox13 [2014-08-14 00:53:36 +0000 UTC]

This is so great. I love it and its so poetic I also laughed cuz i get poetic when i get tired too xDΒ 
Great piece, keep on writing.

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littleblueraccoon In reply to CelestialFox13 [2014-08-31 04:36:18 +0000 UTC]

aw, thank you, I love this comment!

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AnjyBanjy [2014-08-13 22:06:21 +0000 UTC]

This is so sweet and touching. Great work!

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littleblueraccoon In reply to AnjyBanjy [2014-08-31 04:36:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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AnjyBanjy In reply to littleblueraccoon [2014-09-01 18:37:44 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome~

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FeatherEyed [2014-08-13 15:03:27 +0000 UTC]

This story is both sad and beautiful. It pulled at my heartstrings.

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littleblueraccoon In reply to FeatherEyed [2014-08-31 04:35:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I wanted to make something very emotional without it being cheesy or overly dramatic.

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Elenna-Huntress [2014-08-13 01:49:03 +0000 UTC]

Aww... I totally know this feeling, and you've captured it perfectly.Β 

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littleblueraccoon In reply to Elenna-Huntress [2014-08-31 04:35:23 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much

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waraiigoe [2014-08-12 03:04:21 +0000 UTC]

Wow. This is so sad but sweet at the same time. *sniffs* Very well done.

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littleblueraccoon In reply to waraiigoe [2014-08-31 04:35:09 +0000 UTC]

aw, thank you so much!

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DemonicSymbolsSuitMe [2014-08-11 20:09:21 +0000 UTC]

Duuude i love this

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littleblueraccoon In reply to DemonicSymbolsSuitMe [2014-08-31 04:34:58 +0000 UTC]

thanks girlie ^__^

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DemonicSymbolsSuitMe In reply to littleblueraccoon [2014-08-31 14:09:22 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome c:

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pixandpen [2014-08-11 16:33:22 +0000 UTC]

Very good, it actually makes me feel sad for them.

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littleblueraccoon In reply to pixandpen [2014-08-31 04:34:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Β ~

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Kyruto-Chan [2014-08-11 16:30:58 +0000 UTC]

This is so amazing O:

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littleblueraccoon In reply to Kyruto-Chan [2014-08-31 04:34:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Kyruto-Chan In reply to littleblueraccoon [2014-08-31 04:49:13 +0000 UTC]

Mhm ^^

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espernasako [2014-08-11 14:18:16 +0000 UTC]

Stop toying with my emotions >///< I cried a little, this is so beautiful ;u;

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littleblueraccoon In reply to espernasako [2014-08-31 04:34:21 +0000 UTC]

hehe, whoops. Thank you so much!Β 

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tapiLI [2014-08-11 05:25:59 +0000 UTC]

oooh yes.Β 
kinda reminds me of the type of relationship the girl from Orange is the New Black and her fiance shared when she first got into jail
It feels really natural and real.

good work !

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littleblueraccoon In reply to tapiLI [2014-08-31 04:33:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

Ooooh, I really need to start watching OitNB, I hear fantastic things about it.

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tapiLI In reply to littleblueraccoon [2014-08-31 22:10:43 +0000 UTC]

ahaa you're welcome. ; _ ; its so beaut

you should !! its really great ! i loved every episode. the only thing i want to tell you is to just check the ratings/reviews before jump8ng in because there are trigger scenes, nude, etc.etc

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LinaLestrangeArt [2014-08-11 01:21:31 +0000 UTC]

This is profound.

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littleblueraccoon In reply to LinaLestrangeArt [2014-08-31 04:33:17 +0000 UTC]

ah thank you!

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RoyMowz [2014-08-11 00:52:47 +0000 UTC]

That was a very nice poem. I love the conversation form, it feels very natural. the particular things being said in it are lovely as well. Very well done and very heart-warmingΒ 

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littleblueraccoon In reply to RoyMowz [2014-08-31 04:32:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! It was a new thing I wanted to try out.

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crystallized-skies [2014-08-11 00:36:06 +0000 UTC]

This is absolutely amazing. It's simple and sweet but really has a lot of feeling behind it. My favorite line isΒ Β "I will personally sit on a fence post next to the gates of hell and wait for your arrival, so we can step in together."Β 

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littleblueraccoon In reply to crystallized-skies [2014-08-31 04:32:18 +0000 UTC]

thank you! that was one of my favorite lines to write actually~

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DarkRose407 [2014-08-10 22:05:03 +0000 UTC]

Wow, I think this is the first romantic thing in a long time(I mean a long time) to actually make my heart melt. I want this...now I have the feels.Β 

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littleblueraccoon In reply to DarkRose407 [2014-08-31 04:29:15 +0000 UTC]

wow, thank you, this is so sweet! lol enjoy the feels

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QQI25 [2014-08-10 21:52:09 +0000 UTC]

This is lovely. It is so sweet and heartwarming. I want someone to say that to me.

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littleblueraccoon In reply to QQI25 [2014-08-31 04:28:18 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thank you! I hope somebody does say something like this to you one day~

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QQI25 In reply to littleblueraccoon [2014-08-31 12:04:30 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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SECRET-NINJA-SUPER-M [2014-08-10 19:45:10 +0000 UTC]

I agree with Pisces--Dreamer! Β 

The conversation felt very natural, too. I can totally see someone saying these things to someone.

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littleblueraccoon In reply to SECRET-NINJA-SUPER-M [2014-08-31 04:27:16 +0000 UTC]

thank you, I really wanted to make it seem natural, so that's good to know!

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Pisces--Dreamer [2014-08-10 19:43:28 +0000 UTC]

Β  … But seriously, this is beautiful and heart-touching!Β  Β 

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littleblueraccoon In reply to Pisces--Dreamer [2014-08-31 04:26:49 +0000 UTC]

aha thank you, I appreciate the danisnotonfire gif

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