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Description i.



We are ships in the night

would be such a cliche
thing to say
about us;

  we are prideful daisies,
  sorry men and women -
  you suck down your cigarette
  like a god inhaling a forest fire.
 

                                        You think
                                        you can put us
                                       
                   out.
                       
                                  How bright
                                  we burn -
                             

         
                                                                   they can see us from the shore.
                       


                       
ii.



Time has passed.

Roads have been paved.

                                          And you're still there
                                     and I hate you
                   
                     hate you,
                hate you,
           hate you,
 
                                                                             because we are not sinners.
                                                                             We're bigger
                                                                             than sin.
                                                                             We are not giants
                                                                             nor the mother nor the child nor the
                                                                             sea nor the earth nor the god
                                                                             nor whatever else you might think


 
                                will fix this.
 
                                Whatever will fix this,
 
 
 
 
 
 
                                this
                                we are not.



                                                                                             We -



         
iii.



There's been a murder,
just like last time.

There's a priest come to investigate
and you're still burning the body.
You're still wiping the floors
    of all the blood,
   
                                 and what are you going to do,
                                 anyways,
                                 
                                      when they find out
                                      about all the others?
                         
Even if you planned for the trial
and created your alibi

            you're still a small,
                                                  small thing,
                       
        a babe among the trees.
        Saplings
        don't belong
        in the wild.
        The sun burns them
        when they leave the nursery
        too soon.
       

                                                                                             We are -
     


     
iv.



The desert:

patchy
& clean.

You are still hotter
than a sun,
and they still
can see you
from the shore.



                                        You are so far away
                                        from home.
         
                                        You've dragged me there
                                        with you,
         


 and we can accuse
 and a c c u s e
 accuse accuse accuse
 
 
 
 
 
                                       but there is no water.
                                   
                                       It is getting quiet.
                                   
                                       I think,
                                   
                                       we should have -
                                   
                                       we should have called

                                       mother.
                               
                               
                               
                                 
                                   
                                   




dcvi.




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Comments: 26

JessaMar [2020-12-06 18:01:39 +0000 UTC]

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Xtapiowren666 [2020-06-23 06:00:26 +0000 UTC]

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Lionnfart In reply to Xtapiowren666 [2020-07-10 00:00:37 +0000 UTC]

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barefootliam [2020-05-25 03:39:55 +0000 UTC]

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Lionnfart In reply to barefootliam [2020-05-25 03:41:46 +0000 UTC]

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andyending [2020-05-15 18:47:30 +0000 UTC]

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Lionnfart In reply to andyending [2020-05-16 03:40:33 +0000 UTC]

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Eefera [2020-04-28 01:28:42 +0000 UTC]

I'm just finishing reading Dry by Neal Shusterman, and wow does this correlate. 
The formatting is lovely, I enjoyed it. And I really love the way you write poetry as if it were a novel. 

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Lionnfart In reply to Eefera [2020-04-28 02:44:40 +0000 UTC]

I goodread'ed that book and I really think I need to read it! sounds so interesting. ty for the comment, as always.

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Eefera In reply to Lionnfart [2020-04-28 02:46:56 +0000 UTC]

It's intense for sure. And definitely not one I would read if you are having a hard time with everything going on right now. 

Are we friends on goodreads? If not, we should be.

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Lionnfart In reply to Eefera [2020-04-28 02:47:33 +0000 UTC]

I think we are! I joined the bookclub and found you on there. I think. /sweats tehe

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Bobibillius [2020-04-28 00:25:36 +0000 UTC]

I personally really like the formatting. Really enjoyed stanza two.

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Lionnfart In reply to Bobibillius [2020-04-28 02:44:49 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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FASTPASTE [2020-04-27 16:30:42 +0000 UTC]

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Lionnfart In reply to FASTPASTE [2020-04-28 02:44:55 +0000 UTC]

thank you for the comment!

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greenleo94 [2020-04-27 16:20:35 +0000 UTC]

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Lionnfart In reply to greenleo94 [2020-04-28 02:45:02 +0000 UTC]

thank you dear.

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greenleo94 In reply to Lionnfart [2020-04-28 13:18:10 +0000 UTC]

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blanketings [2020-04-27 13:13:08 +0000 UTC]

the desert stanza tho. i Love

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Lionnfart In reply to blanketings [2020-04-28 02:45:18 +0000 UTC]

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MozartsNemesis [2020-04-27 09:49:15 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely adore this. I love the use of repetition, it's sparse and impactful. Also, the build up to We are Sorry throughout was a nice touch and gave the poem an anticipatory lilt.
As always, your imagery astounds.

Favorite line:

" you suck down your cigarette

  like a god inhaling a forest fire."


It's such a perfect image that I can see it clearly in my mind. Well done.

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Lionnfart In reply to MozartsNemesis [2020-04-28 02:45:51 +0000 UTC]

eee ty. glad this was well received. I've decided just number sections in a poem and everyone will go crazy for it. XD

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incalyscent [2020-04-27 06:09:21 +0000 UTC]

im shook

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Lionnfart In reply to incalyscent [2020-04-28 02:46:02 +0000 UTC]

tehe. ty

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Alice-Hutchison [2020-04-27 05:34:23 +0000 UTC]

I enjoyed the structure, this piece is very well-written and captures so much emotion. It is beautiful.

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Lionnfart In reply to Alice-Hutchison [2020-04-28 02:46:22 +0000 UTC]

thanks a llama   

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