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Cambion-Hunter [2019-09-05 01:38:06 +0000 UTC]
Has a slight surrealist feel to it. ^^
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TrendyStaMacigian [2019-09-04 19:42:39 +0000 UTC]
You got it finished! Good job! Want an update on my fanfiction for Angry Beavers? (I did fan art too but it's not good)
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TrendyStaMacigian In reply to LionheartArtz [2019-09-05 20:52:03 +0000 UTC]
Tell me what you think of it so far. It's meant to be funny, not scary. Here's the fanfiction preview:
When Treeflower finally got the pictures sent, he laughed so hard and forgot all about Truckee’s ghost. “Oh my gosh! Norb and Dag are such doofs! I can’t believe I’m marrying Norb! I’d say, guys never grow up! Hahaha” Treeflower laughed as she looked the theme park pictures. Then, she realized she was the childish one because she was watching a kids show on tv. There’s nothing wrong with watching a kids show, she just kept on watching it anyway, not paying attention to anything else. “I think I’ll call my beloved fiance, Norbert!” said Treeflower. She picked up the phone, but then remembered that the beavers weren’t staying at a hotel, they were staying in a stairway that led to a mysterious door, behind a Walmart in the mountains. “My poor Norby!” Treeflower said to herself “He probably can’t sleep with all those shopping carts moving around at night”. Meanwhile, Norb and Dag, and their family were staying in that stairway with the mysterious door, and saw shopping carts rolling by themselves. “This is just a coincidence” Daggett tried to tell himself “There’s no ghosts here”. Norb we’was shivering and hugging his brother. “This… This can happen to anyone. Yeah, we’re not the only one’s here either” he shivered. A shopping cart rolled by slowly, making a creepy squeak. The rest of the beaver family was asleep, and Norb and Dag were the only ones awake. “Norb! I can’t sleep!” cried Dag. “Neither can I! But remember that we’re safe! Nothing bad can happen” said Norb, until a huge wind came and blew a creepy scarecrow down in the stairway. Norb and Dag had no choice but to open the creepy door and run inside, screaming. After all this, their family didn’t seem to wake up or move at all. It was just, Norb, Dag, and the creepy door that had swung open by itself
Backstory, Truckee started harassing Norbert and Daggett about a ghost, Treeflower proposed to marry Norb, Norb isn't sure if he wanted to get married so he decided to spend some time with his family before the big wedding breaks them up, and now Truckee's harassing Treeflower about the ghost but she isn't as scared. That's what I have so far
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