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QuietCrystal [2011-12-31 00:08:21 +0000 UTC]
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Overall, I'd say you achieved a sort of calmness in the picture. That's great for a picture like this.
The shading technique is good, but the shading itself is a bit off. I think growlithe should be a bit darker on the sides facing away, and yellow-ish towards the firefly. Just make the dark parts darker on your pictures. It looks more dramatic that way, and emphasizes on its form, and the surrounding shadows.
The background's great, I like how you show depth by using increasingly faded shapes. However, I don't quite get the light at the top. Are those fireflies, or lights from a city far away? If fireflies, try to scatter them all over the picture, not just cluster them at the top. If it's a city you're going for, then make the lights duller, and give them less glow. Try to reduce the brightness of the blue grass too. It competes for attention with growlithe.
However, overall the picture looks great e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/> Growlithe is cute, and the night scene has a calm yet warm feeling. Great job.
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Lin00ne In reply to QuietCrystal [2012-01-01 14:46:20 +0000 UTC]
First of all, thank you for taking your time to write a critique, I really appriciate it.
Now, the shading. I have to admit that I totally forgot about the light from the firefly and the shadows going with it on growlithe, maybe because i added the background after totally finishing the Growlithe. It's realy great that you mention it, so i can keep an eye on that next time! c:
Haha, those lights were ment to be stars, but now i see that they're very close lookalike with the firefly, causing some confusion. xD
Thank you for writing this all down, i'll be sure to keep it in mind next time.
Thank you! c:
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hezoo In reply to Lin00ne [2012-01-07 02:24:39 +0000 UTC]
Aw, you're welcome ^^
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Twewy-yumi [2012-01-01 15:27:48 +0000 UTC]
Awwww thats cute
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SaphireWolfezz [2011-12-30 18:51:20 +0000 UTC]
This is completly AWESOME :3
I loveee it~
I love how you colour and shade, and your drawing style is soo cute i love it >w<
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Lin00ne In reply to SaphireWolfezz [2012-01-01 14:54:57 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much, that really means the world to me! ;u;
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angie-the-knight [2011-12-30 17:01:24 +0000 UTC]
Oh my... so cuteeee. I love the little beard thing. It looks incredible with the lighting and ground along with the firefly/butterfly.
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Lin00ne In reply to angie-the-knight [2012-01-01 14:56:19 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, i love that part myself too. xDDD
;u;
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WiinterFox [2011-12-30 13:50:12 +0000 UTC]
It's so adorable <333
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Lin00ne In reply to WiinterFox [2012-01-01 14:55:42 +0000 UTC]
Thank you~ It's much appriciated! <333
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WiinterFox In reply to Lin00ne [2012-01-01 18:06:25 +0000 UTC]
Your welcome <33
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