Comments: 19
zek-a-rt [2014-05-06 17:47:21 +0000 UTC]
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Great idea but execution isn't up to the task, so the end-result shows great potential instead of excellence.
Nice use of colours and background gives nice contrast. Highlight for me is and how you made the connections with the flowers, model and the butterflies - as if the model itself is a flower that butterflies are attracted to. However, this highlight is dimmed with...well too much stuff.
Earrings, lace dress, butterflies, model, flowers - all are beautiful, but putting them all together made it into a fight for attention. For instance, you can't really see the earrings in all their glory because they are "lost" in the butterflies. Complexity of the butterflies and the lace dress are mixed up so you can't admire them fully.
Choose the primary object in the picture (butterflies for instance), then remove anything that makes the primary object less visible. Then add something that complements the primary object: match plain/simple with complex/colourful - don't mix colourful with colourful, complex with complex etc. Would the plain black dress complement the colourful butterflies better than the lace one? Will removing the earrings make the butterflies the main thing on the stage? Try it, see how it feels!
Once more, awesome idea and potential. I strongly encourage you to remake this deviation (with the above in mind) and compare the two works. See for yourself.
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fataFivena [2018-09-20 12:30:05 +0000 UTC]
♡♡♡
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OrionShipworks [2014-07-28 20:38:42 +0000 UTC]
Creative and exciting image. Nice work!
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DanicaWish [2014-05-25 16:40:24 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful! Every detail is gorgeous!
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Jeanne26 [2014-05-23 16:26:56 +0000 UTC]
Absolutly Beautifull *o*!
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tahirlazim [2014-05-09 07:43:06 +0000 UTC]
Admirable.
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RachaelSammon [2014-05-08 13:58:24 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow, what a beautiful regal image. I love the rich, opulent tones.
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PapaG-art [2014-05-06 15:31:46 +0000 UTC]
Is that you as model? Stunningly beautiful whom ever she is!! I am in love--for the 3547th time!! But this one is for real
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FuzzyScribbles [2014-05-02 19:25:24 +0000 UTC]
Omg all those butterflies, beautiful <3
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mecengineer [2014-05-02 19:06:29 +0000 UTC]
excellent
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