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LexiWynn — Just Too Afraid
Published: 2011-04-28 22:19:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 303; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 3
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Description I hope you know that I am just a lonely girl
That does not have the pedigree of kings
I'm pushed around by legions of my peers
Staring out my window thinking pensive thoughts

She is the one that they all want to be
Blasphemy if you have not heard her name
They carry her in atop their shoulders
Mistaking their gods for a cheerleader prom queen

One day I saw you walk in with all your friends
I pondered the thought of what we might become
But she saw you first and stole you away
Without even giving me a chance to fight

She said these words that I never forgot
You're wasting your time, you stupid good-for-nothing
No one wants for you to win his heart
Just watch him fall hopelessly into my arms

I was just too afraid to raise my voice
To disprove my mind of what I am not, but
If you always do what you've always done,
You'll always get what you've always got.
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Comments: 16

darkisfriend [2011-05-15 18:47:25 +0000 UTC]

this is relly pretty ^^

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LexiWynn In reply to darkisfriend [2011-05-15 19:20:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Rena How's your stuff going? Any more people noticing it?

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darkisfriend In reply to LexiWynn [2011-05-15 19:28:21 +0000 UTC]

Si!! this 1 chick commented on "For a Moment" she said it was georgious!! then a few other ppl added it to their faves along with "Do Your Remember" i feel happy now!!!!!

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LexiWynn In reply to darkisfriend [2011-05-15 23:31:03 +0000 UTC]

Thats awesome!!! Im so happy for you, I told you your stuff was good!!

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darkisfriend In reply to LexiWynn [2011-05-16 02:23:24 +0000 UTC]

Ik But it stills evn more awesome wen total strangers think your good!!!

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LexiWynn In reply to darkisfriend [2011-05-16 03:45:12 +0000 UTC]

If you want I can have my crazy poet friend on here check 'em out and tell you what he thinks

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darkisfriend In reply to LexiWynn [2011-05-16 20:06:26 +0000 UTC]

hahahaha the stalker?? OK!!!! lol i just want ppl to read my stuff!!!!


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LexiWynn In reply to darkisfriend [2011-05-16 23:55:29 +0000 UTC]

Lol I'm working on it XD anything else new??

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darkisfriend In reply to LexiWynn [2011-05-18 20:44:45 +0000 UTC]

Why don't you look for yourself!!

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LexiWynn In reply to darkisfriend [2011-05-19 01:50:58 +0000 UTC]

You're doing good

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darkisfriend In reply to LexiWynn [2011-05-19 18:32:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!! i would sure hope so!!!!

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jai98 [2011-04-29 12:22:11 +0000 UTC]

This is really good it seems quite personal which i think makes a poem Nice Work!!!!!!

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LexiWynn In reply to jai98 [2011-04-29 22:28:30 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!

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124GCode541 [2011-04-28 22:29:20 +0000 UTC]

I like it. I have done a few for my English class, but they had the fixed thing. I wanted to freestyle it, but of course, it was an assignment, and we had to. And I have no idea what aphorism, invective, juxtaposition, or autobiographical mean, well autobiographical is self explanitory, but I havent really read anything like that...yet. I think it had a classic line plot, and you put your own twist into it, and made it your own. Its great.

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LexiWynn In reply to 124GCode541 [2011-04-28 23:37:44 +0000 UTC]

thanks...I'm glad you liked it

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124GCode541 In reply to LexiWynn [2011-04-30 06:45:50 +0000 UTC]

... no prob

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