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Published: 2015-03-22 21:59:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 341; Favourites: 32; Downloads: 3
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Description Oil painting.

I really liked that painting until I saw that one of flowers is a bit too dark.. I want to give it as a gift to my boyfriends mom.
What do you think about it, should I change anything?
Thank you for all your suggestions
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Comments: 9

tolosati [2017-11-22 11:48:31 +0000 UTC]

renklerin ve güzelliğin dansı

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LuckySpirit14 [2015-03-25 01:51:25 +0000 UTC]

pretty!

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Leuseni In reply to LuckySpirit14 [2015-03-25 22:47:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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LuckySpirit14 In reply to Leuseni [2015-03-25 23:57:36 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome!  

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GuillermoMuller [2015-03-23 14:05:20 +0000 UTC]

Perfectas.

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Leuseni In reply to GuillermoMuller [2015-03-23 22:41:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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Siscile [2015-03-22 22:02:39 +0000 UTC]

The darker flower in the top left corner adds depth. I would not change anything, if I were you as the painting would appear flat. A little more contrast in that flower instead may help, though avoiding taking attention away from the main composition (the central flower, where the gaze is drawn first).

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Leuseni In reply to Siscile [2015-03-22 22:25:50 +0000 UTC]

Good point, I will consider it. Maybe tomorrow I'll work on it.
I'm also afraid that the flower in the bottom left corner has too dark shadow, what do you think about it?

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Siscile In reply to Leuseni [2015-04-06 22:16:03 +0000 UTC]

I see what you mean about the bottom left flower- it looks like this because those shadows are next to some very bright highlights. It may be worthwhile softening the contrast especially in the bottom 2 petals of this flower (since the other petals overhang them and the highlights there would not be so bright).

I am so impressed that you are paying such close attention to each flower! Your botanical drawings and paintings are lovely.

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