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tolosati [2017-11-22 11:48:31 +0000 UTC]
renklerin ve güzelliğin dansı
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Siscile [2015-03-22 22:02:39 +0000 UTC]
The darker flower in the top left corner adds depth. I would not change anything, if I were you as the painting would appear flat. A little more contrast in that flower instead may help, though avoiding taking attention away from the main composition (the central flower, where the gaze is drawn first).
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Leuseni In reply to Siscile [2015-03-22 22:25:50 +0000 UTC]
Good point, I will consider it. Maybe tomorrow I'll work on it.
I'm also afraid that the flower in the bottom left corner has too dark shadow, what do you think about it?
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Siscile In reply to Leuseni [2015-04-06 22:16:03 +0000 UTC]
I see what you mean about the bottom left flower- it looks like this because those shadows are next to some very bright highlights. It may be worthwhile softening the contrast especially in the bottom 2 petals of this flower (since the other petals overhang them and the highlights there would not be so bright).
I am so impressed that you are paying such close attention to each flower! Your botanical drawings and paintings are lovely.
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