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Silverlline [2017-09-25 21:25:46 +0000 UTC]
So, let me say first that I love the designs. I can see them as great candidates for the competition.
You stuck to the white with red streaks which originally is a great look already. I do like how you made the red streaks look like they are flowing throughout her hair. I haven't quite seen anything like that yet. Now I want to go dye my own hair... Bah my life~
The one on the left is lovely, however I feel that the outfit lacks a bit of 'oomph' if you know what I mean? I feel there is too much black and not enough actual color going on. Liliana is a girl who is badass and punky and wants to set things on fire but she's also vibrant and friendly. I feel like she wouldn't go for an almost ALL black outfit. Though the one on the right really goes further into different shades and colors. The arm warmers are quite lovely and I can just imagine her lacing them up in the mornings telling herself she looks 'amazing' in the mirror. The black lipstick is a throw off though. She doesn't seem the type to wear such dark shades if she were to wear make up at all. I do know she's okay with a little bit.
That cape part to the pants though on the right one In LOVE with it! I adore anything cape like~
All in all, great designs and great competitors to the other designs. You have a nice style I think you should also stick with~ Keep making great work lovely
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Leshine In reply to Silverlline [2017-09-25 21:31:34 +0000 UTC]
ok first thank you! and also i started to notice that the more i looked at it and its really bugged me over time the more i thought it over but i got over flowed with work and at the time i had people rushing me to get there art done so i was really stressed but i dont think that was worth trying to throwing a unorganized entry tbh though i was going to redo it but i just dropped and broke my tablet the day before yesterday so thats going to hold me back now but i can try to do another to replace this if given a chance ;v; BUT i do thank you for your criticism because i love that type of feedback and i really dont ever get that at all ;v;
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Silverlline In reply to Leshine [2017-09-25 22:11:48 +0000 UTC]
You broke your tablet D: I know that must suck. They are expensive since I can't really afford one. I barely got enough money to get a new one recently and it's simple and tiny however I used to use a mouse before so it's better than that at least even though I'm so used to my mouse I do do alot of the art process with it. My linework is done with mouse and some colors but shading and special effects are all tablet.
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Leshine In reply to Silverlline [2017-09-25 22:15:05 +0000 UTC]
rly? o: ah thats really cool i used to use a mouse but then i got a tablet but i have this old tablet i got but it never worked it functions like a mouse one one programs lets you use a mouse like a tablet although its not as good without a tablet but its still ok if i really want to get something done o:
and boi you need to teach me how to do that magic with a mouse i cant do that XD
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Silverlline In reply to Leshine [2017-09-25 22:26:27 +0000 UTC]
Ahhh well I hope you get a working one soon. The one I use is a wacom intuos draw. It's the small one that's like 80$ works better than my old off brand one that kept messing with me.
Mouse work? I've been doing it since I was 14 so I've had practice but alot of my magic with linework is done in SAI with the lineworking tools. It's easy to make the lines look smooth and crisp with just a mouse. All the editing tools are amazing. Though... I did do this work with just a mouse. The only thing that wasn't was an intial sketch done on paper.
It was quite tedious but anything can be achieved with photoshop knowledge and patience. I use the pen tool alot which has alot of great functions.
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Leshine In reply to Silverlline [2017-09-25 22:46:35 +0000 UTC]
yeah i had that to o:
and thats cool how you can do that its so difficult to do ;v; i used to do lineless with a mouse XD bad choice but i did use the line work tool on sai sometimes o: but seriously thats a great picture!
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IvorySmiles [2017-09-17 20:53:12 +0000 UTC]
I really love the hair oh my goodness, funny enough she reminds me of Mystery Girl from that one Steven Universe episode XD The 2nd outfit is really nice, and I LOVE the flame effect in the first picture! Good luck!!
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Leshine In reply to IvorySmiles [2017-09-17 20:56:35 +0000 UTC]
ah thank you! and she does sorta remind me of her to know that you mention that XDDD and thank you! ;v;
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Whimsical-Wings [2017-09-17 16:19:08 +0000 UTC]
I love the way you interpreted the design of her hair, very unique~!
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daisyrosalina00 [2017-09-17 15:25:03 +0000 UTC]
I love her fluffy hair and the outfits are really unique!!
Also those sunglasses!
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Leshine In reply to Panrill [2017-09-17 14:19:45 +0000 UTC]
//pulls up chair and sits down and breaths in// ;u; hold on i need to breath for a second.....;u;u;u;u;u;
i did NOT expect this reaction ;v; I JUST I HGNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN ;w; i klike how you said she looked like a greaser and how she looked like she walked out of a Evanescence music video XD i didnt even think about that it kinda does lol and i was going to draw the signature on the first one but on the back near the shoulder area to but i mean like i wasnt for sure XD and yus the cape and glasses were just something cool i just decided to add lol and i still wanted to keep her scar in both designs in some way so thats what happened ;v;
tbh i love both of them XD i wish there were able to be multiple enrty's XDD lol im a multiple entry person sometimes when i get alot of ideas lmao but i guess ill go with the first one just because i feel it looks coooooooooooooool both of them do but i kinda like the sunglasses to black the fire thing XD
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Leshine In reply to Panrill [2017-09-17 15:09:49 +0000 UTC]
XDDD i was to tired to think to breath lmao
i do like evanescence although i havent listen to there music alot XD tbh that probably because im watching comedy skits and art videos all the time lol XD lmao the black lipstick and cape sort of drew that thought lolllll
also the reason i had the cape is because she had a trench coat before so i was like she need something to keep that cool long look and bam le cape >:3 and i wanted to keep it since its one of the things that sort of signiflys her look other than her cool design in her quills XD
XD i know there's alot of people alot of creative minds XD there all going to find a way to out do this trust me! X3 i cant wait to see the other designs! and really i set the bar high? XD lol thats a first evry contest ive joined im just a meh ish okkkkkkkkkkk XD i cant wait to see how this turns out! im excited owo
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Leshine In reply to Panrill [2017-09-18 00:50:37 +0000 UTC]
ah its fine! take as much time as you need to reply really!!! ;v;
and also you can pick which one you want to judge XDDD tbh i think it would be better if you had the choice lol XD tbh ive already been outdone by your other amazing entry's XD and thats only the beginning lol
buts ish going to be fineeeeee! your going to do a great job! XD
also i can imagine her just flipping around the cape X,D
but still its fine im fine with waiting XD
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illumyra [2017-09-17 05:28:31 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful designs ^-^ I really love the details in the hair, and the clothing was a beautiful touch and compliments the hair greatly ^^
Good luck on the contest! ^^ I'm sure she will love it <3
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Leshine In reply to illumyra [2017-09-17 05:32:41 +0000 UTC]
ah thank you! ;v; i hope she does to
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illumyra In reply to Leshine [2017-09-17 05:49:57 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome! ^-^ <33 And I know she will ^-^
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CookieGlory [2017-09-17 05:27:08 +0000 UTC]
hey sis dont forget mine ;u;
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Leshine In reply to CookieGlory [2017-09-17 05:28:37 +0000 UTC]
i wont i just have to think of something for it ;v;
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CookieGlory In reply to Leshine [2017-09-17 05:31:00 +0000 UTC]
i hope u ve till december tho..^^
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Leshine In reply to CookieGlory [2017-09-17 05:33:39 +0000 UTC]
yeah thats plenty of time ^v^
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CookieGlory In reply to Leshine [2017-09-17 05:36:47 +0000 UTC]
yea i hope alot of ppl will join its a good concept i think ^^ like u re the judge with the others not me !^^
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CookieGlory In reply to Leshine [2017-09-17 05:43:22 +0000 UTC]
aaah its stressful
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