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LeonSwiftstorm — Hey again
Published: 2011-04-10 01:56:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 555; Favourites: 45; Downloads: 7
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[ English ]Time for another remake!
The original picture was made over two years ago, I remember it was a completely random idea, and everybody liked it because of the colour scheme
I remade it, just to see how much I have improved, and I must say I really like this x3
The original can be found here: [link]
[ Español ]
Es hora de otro remake!
el dibujo original fue hecho hace mas de dos años, recuerdo que fue una idea completamente random, y a todos les gustó por el esquema de colores
Lo volvi a hacer, solo para ver si he mejorado, y debo decir que me gustó mucho x3
El original lo pueden encontrar aqui: [link]
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Comments: 17
I will start by saying I can definitely see a big improvement between the two. The details in the flower and the vibrant colors especially stick out to me. The sky looks much better here without the lines in the background like the older one. The post also looks less awkward.
One thing that is improved from the last drawing but could still use some work is the grass. It is good that you are no longer relying on the grass brush but the grass here is very blurry and clumped. The way you positioned it almost looks like you were having a hard time with the bottom of its body and tried to cover it up. I'm not saying you were, I'm just saying that is what the positioning of the grass implies. I say this because I have seen quite a bit of it (and have even done it myself in the past).
The shading is definitely better here than the old piece. The older one looked slightly plastic with the highlights but the shadows and highlights here look more natural.
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Indeed, I also think the sky looks better without the extra outline
As you implied, I want to try something different for the grass, using the default grass brush is not bad but is very overused so I looked throught different tutorials and digital pictures to see how to make my own grass. Is one of my first attempts, I know is not perfect 
Is good to see you liked the picture and you took your time to write a very decent critique, thank you very much!
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Practice is how you get better at it.
And you're welcome.
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Pero mira nada más, alguien si que le ha puesto ganas al dibujo y este el resultado!
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Muchas gracias Arturo!
Recuerdo que a ti te gustó mucho el dibujo original, y veo que tambien el nuevo x3
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Muchas de nada, Terrel!
Y ke ambos estan bien hechos, me tenían que gustar, sabes?
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No es Bulbasaur, es Ivysaur
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ahh si tienes razon xp me confundi
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hdenkjdkjneknkrnf!!1 que mono!! <33 me encanta como te quedo esta para postal 
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muchas muchas gracias hermanita!!!
Gracias por el comentario, me alegra que te guste tanto como el original te gustó alguna vez x3
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