Comments: 33
xVanyx [2014-10-05 19:21:48 +0000 UTC]
I do not understand the very last sentence, but exept for that it's a wonderfull short story ^.^
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xVanyx In reply to Leonca [2014-10-05 22:07:50 +0000 UTC]
you're welcome
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TheWeeLad [2014-10-05 16:50:02 +0000 UTC]
This story sets up a fascinating look at an 'alien' culture, what with the way they consider death and mortality and the ceremonies that surround it. Top notch work my friend.
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Laurenabees [2014-10-05 15:23:44 +0000 UTC]
Wha- it's beautiful, and a very lovely story, but I don't think I understand. ^^"
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Leonca In reply to Laurenabees [2014-10-05 18:29:21 +0000 UTC]
In this world, the soul of the recently dead can leave the body and chose to give a little goodbye blessing to one person before passing on.
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Korwynze [2014-10-05 13:57:02 +0000 UTC]
katie seems like a spoiled child to me, she wouldnt have deserved to get the blessing!
its a very nice story ^^
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TheLadyYuki [2014-10-05 13:29:57 +0000 UTC]
This was a great read. Congrats on the DD!
And I am glad Katie did not get the blessing because she sounds like a little bitch.
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SCFrankles [2014-08-13 21:01:51 +0000 UTC]
I love the imagery of the flies. And the straightforward way you present this strange world - because of course it isn't strange for the characters.
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MagicalJoey [2014-08-12 21:01:23 +0000 UTC]
I tend to stumble across things accidentally and then like them or hate them...but this I really liked.
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