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Sanvi-LeAwesomeOne [2015-12-06 18:50:45 +0000 UTC]
the poem was so sad...
but then i saw your profile pic XDDDDDD
(not to be mean o3o)
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Scr1b3 [2012-12-31 00:57:18 +0000 UTC]
I love this...
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SplitNinja [2012-10-19 05:02:16 +0000 UTC]
I'm left speechless.
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leogirl321 In reply to SplitNinja [2012-10-20 22:59:22 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. xD That's good I guess.
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Kanamesama913 [2012-10-19 00:57:51 +0000 UTC]
Wow... That is true. So sad but true.
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EmmaRivera [2012-10-19 00:09:27 +0000 UTC]
I like it. It's a very good poem. It remainded me od the old me and the old, sceary, depresing past. Keep up with the poetry. Iy's relly good
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starell [2012-10-18 18:32:22 +0000 UTC]
aw, so utterly beautiful and sad, I love all of the raw emotion so evident in this!
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leogirl321 In reply to starell [2012-10-18 21:05:02 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. I'm really glad you like it. And you're right there was a lot of emotion in this piece. But that's okay because that's what poetry is about.
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starell In reply to leogirl321 [2012-10-18 22:03:31 +0000 UTC]
You are most welcome! We make art because otherwise we couldn't contain all of the emotions
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leogirl321 In reply to starell [2012-10-18 22:21:17 +0000 UTC]
True, true. xD
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Froggygirl101 [2012-10-18 03:23:52 +0000 UTC]
It would have been great to know this before I started high school. I love it! It's the truth, and I really love the phrasing on it.
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leogirl321 In reply to Froggygirl101 [2012-10-18 21:09:41 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for liking it. There is a lot of truth in it, you're right. I'm kind of tired of people sugar coating things and saying, it's going to be okay when it might not be. Just a brief trip to reality that's all. X)
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DotCatSign [2012-10-18 01:53:32 +0000 UTC]
Wouldn't it be wonderful if instead of saying sorry, we could instead look down and say, you're welcome?
Really nice piece, I liked it.
(By the way, the "I" on the 12th line should probable be an "I'm" or "I am".)
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DotCatSign In reply to leogirl321 [2012-11-05 16:54:18 +0000 UTC]
No problem, although I now feel like running around trying to make the world a better place. The only question is, were to start.
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LuvScissors [2012-10-18 01:50:45 +0000 UTC]
I can't express how much you've made me want to believe that there's still darkness and light out there, but all I can say that it brought tears to my eyes because of the truth of all this. I adore this piece! You say 'I'm Sorry', but I'm here to say 'Thank you so much' for giving me something to read and to remember when I'm alone at 'night'. I really mean it. Thank you.
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LuvScissors In reply to leogirl321 [2012-10-18 23:27:49 +0000 UTC]
No problem, it's my pleasure~ Yes, it's very hard. ; v ;
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AirGirl13 [2012-10-18 01:39:16 +0000 UTC]
This is incredible. Yeah, that thing rolling down my cheek would be a tear. This is spectacular. It makes me feel better about something that happened recently. It touches me.
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AirGirl13 In reply to leogirl321 [2012-10-18 22:52:28 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, my friends have been there through everything. That's why I love them so much.
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baterypower [2012-10-18 01:19:52 +0000 UTC]
im sorry two
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AgentIceheart [2012-10-18 00:58:31 +0000 UTC]
This is great, and gave me new light in a situation I'm dealing with. Beautiful work, and many thanks! x3
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