Comments: 32
Astrior [2016-04-01 04:58:05 +0000 UTC]
I probably would of just banned pokemon battling, since to me it sounds just like dog fighting, or any other animals fights.
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PokebratJ [2015-04-27 00:19:20 +0000 UTC]
HAHAHA!!! Why did she give Touko pornos?!?!?! HAHAHA!!!
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kiddopolis [2012-03-05 09:03:11 +0000 UTC]
Ma gawd......N......you're sooo...GAHHH!!!!
Ack...ima suck up...I love you N
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Arti-vibe [2011-12-18 04:05:44 +0000 UTC]
It kills me to think if I was one of those trainers losing my pokemon which I believe are like friends. I love N, I really do. But I hate it that he was raised to believe that all pokemon feel slaved.
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typhlosion4ever In reply to Arti-vibe [2012-01-11 15:48:43 +0000 UTC]
Your so right if pokemon was real i'd be so sad as well
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Lemuris In reply to Arti-vibe [2011-12-19 01:29:15 +0000 UTC]
I know what you mean. I'd probably be shattered.
Ghetsis is the one to blame, really.
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Arti-vibe In reply to Lemuris [2011-12-19 01:58:12 +0000 UTC]
Yes, he's the one reason why N believed what he believes, I blame Ghetsis
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Evilpoffin [2011-11-04 23:03:46 +0000 UTC]
N YOU TWIT! I LOVE YOU BUT ID RATHER DIE THEN DO WHAT YOU TELL ME TO! i love this story so much TT.TT
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Sirus7009 [2011-10-27 00:50:55 +0000 UTC]
I can't help laughter and sadness. That's why I love this fanfiction ^^ it moves me!
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Lemuris In reply to madmad295 [2011-10-17 21:44:59 +0000 UTC]
LOL Aww, don't worry pip! It'll get better. C:
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Lemuris In reply to Mimmystar [2011-10-12 21:58:18 +0000 UTC]
Luckily you and another reader spotted it. xD
Otherwise it would have been left to burn
holes into other readers eyes.
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owloftheleaves In reply to Lemuris [2011-10-13 01:46:04 +0000 UTC]
Haha. Actually I know her, we were reading together and I pointed it out. xD
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owloftheleaves [2011-10-12 17:21:04 +0000 UTC]
First of all, I love this.
Second of all, I found this sentence:
"But N merely entered the room and Hoshi did a complete three-sixty on her."
He should be doin a 180. a 360 leaves him where he started.
sincerely,
A Nerd
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Lemuris In reply to owloftheleaves [2011-10-12 17:40:41 +0000 UTC]
LOL Thank you very much, nerd. I'll see if
I can fix that.
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Mimmystar [2011-10-12 17:20:31 +0000 UTC]
180, not 360
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Lemuris In reply to Mimmystar [2011-10-12 17:40:10 +0000 UTC]
I minor mistake. If everyone knows what I meant
than it's all fine. C:
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Mimmystar [2011-10-12 17:20:19 +0000 UTC]
geometrically incorrect
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GirLovesThePizzaMan [2011-10-11 00:06:27 +0000 UTC]
RAHHHHHH! N I DONT CARE HOW CUTE YOU ARE AT THIS POINT IN TIME! YOU MIGHT WANNA BE PREPARED FOR A BLACK EYE!!! ....nice work btw lol
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okamispiderbrush [2011-10-04 04:32:33 +0000 UTC]
Goodness, that was pretty depressing. I wouldn't know what I'd do if I was in the Pokemon world. Probably bawl my eyes out at least.
This was a nice chapter, looking forward to the rest!
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Lemuris In reply to okamispiderbrush [2011-10-05 08:54:34 +0000 UTC]
You and me both! I'd cry AND do something drastic.
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Lemuris In reply to Miss-Barker [2011-10-05 08:54:03 +0000 UTC]
C: It'll be up soon!
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SingeBlade [2011-10-02 17:59:15 +0000 UTC]
aw this chapter is so sad though i love reading this series :3 keep it going XD
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Lemuris In reply to SingeBlade [2011-10-05 08:53:54 +0000 UTC]
Hehe, I will! C: And don't worry, it gets better!
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Lemuris In reply to hikarra [2011-10-02 16:35:07 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I was freaking out looking for chapter 4's
cover until I remembered that it was the first fan
art you drew for Eden. [I'm stupid] xD
Oh, I hope you have a good break! You deserve it. C:
Hehe. ^_^
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