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freaky208 [2012-05-20 06:59:41 +0000 UTC]

Hi there
This was featured here [link] and [link] as part of the "Super Features", a feature exclusive to all the point donors who helped #All-For-Art become a super group.
Really sorry it took so long , but thanks again!

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nurhas [2011-05-30 14:35:37 +0000 UTC]

<3 <3 <3

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StevenZybert [2011-05-28 19:44:45 +0000 UTC]

Not bad at all. A few things I noticed...
1) The colors are very well put together but the light blue and bright red clashing in the center just doesn't blend well enough.
It's like the brightest colors in the piece just dropped off into a black abyss. Try blending the colors a bit more. Drag out the bright colors into your edges a touch.
2) There isn't really much depth. A good way to fix this would be to blur the image (mainly the C4D's) more and more as you get towards the edges. Once thats done, even try sharpening the center part of it.
3) Theres no defined light source. When working with lighting you should try to keep one or two light sources. In this it looks as if there is light coming in at all angles.
Maybe try adding a light source, white gradient, in the top right and on towards the middle left hand side.

On another note, I have the exact same C4D's. I love them!
And I would love to see more pieces in this style. Just work on those few things.

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