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Published: 2014-01-09 06:02:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 593; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 1
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I tried to draw a background.....somewhat.Ā
Line art:DesignerJACE
Program Used: Paint Tool Sai
Time:4 hours
Lavi Bookman (c) Katsura Hoshino
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Good job on the coloring! Really!
I also paint linearts when I have time and Im not very good at it lol
I love the effects you did on the shading and lighting,
As well as the combination of colors.
Its hard to find imperfection in this eyecatching (and sexy) artwork, but the only critique I can tell you if I was being picky, is his right shoulder.
There's a white paint along the lines of his shoulder, in front of the black shadow on the pavement. It makes him look 2D a bit.
Simple erase would fix it though!
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Welcome back,Ā 
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Okay I will first say it is a really good piece of art e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
Also first I love the different colour and how they mix up together (gorgeus)
I love your angel of view, it makes it feel like you are a tall person and he just coming up in your face like: what's up! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/bā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
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(sorry for my bad english, I suck I know)
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I admire this art piece I can see the effort put into it and the talent I cannot draw but this one definitely caught my attention. I do dislike tat some of the lines are very obviously different sizes where they should in my opinion be the same but I do however love the eyes and the details put into the picture. His eye patch is also fantastic and made me instantly wonder what the back story to that was something that I like as it leaves me wanting to know more about the character and his past as a whole keep up the good work
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I can draw humans, but not as good as what you did. I'll just say, yours was incredibly nice, but those lines have different sizes. First I thought the sizes of the lines would be different depending on the distance of the object. I accept it as the reason of why the lines for the head is too thick and the lines for the cloth is much thinner. But then I see the lines for his pants, and it was also thick, even thicker than the cloth. The line for the street was also seems "double" because it looks branchy. So I assume that you should make sure that the lines you used for your deviations were proportional.
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He looks cute! Great job, I seriously admire it. I can't even draw backgrounds...XD
And I can't be serious about critiques either....But still! Amazing.
Can't say much more, so:
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Thanks for your time,Ā 
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I love this overall. It is very great! I love your background, I think it is fine the way it is. It gives off a very unique and quiet feel. Very nice art work you have, and I hope you continue to draw.
I can not draw humans very well, so it is very nice to see someone who can, and who enjoys drawing them! You have a very unique style, and it is again, very nice to look at. I hope you continue drawing humans for all of us who think we can not. Again, your at work is very marvelous and breathtaking.
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Welcome back,Ā
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I must say it's a very well done piece of art. The shading was done so it really did look like a street lamp was to his side and it's colourful in a cool and errie way but one problem I did really have with this was the angle if you look at the street it sort of looks like it's more a wall than a background just something for you to work with in future. My advise would be to have the yellow road lines a bit further behind or maybe tilt the road a bit differently and added those little concrete edges of the pavement wouldn't go amiss. Good work though keep it up.
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Hey there,Ā 
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Like the other, i give the rest of the star to the person who did the lineart e.deviantart.net/emoticons/letā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
Because it's a fantastic job !
Your coloring is very good either in this one ! And the white lines on the costum are just very precise and neat, great !
But maybe you should add more rough shadow, there are not enough visible and the hightlight can be seen. That's too bad because when i see the left part i'm sure it can be just FABULOUS MAX.
You've the good way to do awesome things, just practice more and that'll be like the best artists !
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Hey there,Ā
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First of all, the shading looks pretty nice. It looks like you have a good idea of where the shadows fall, but I don't think the soft 'airbrushed' shading works with this drawing. Although cell shading is a bit more difficult, it can make a big difference. Same thing with the lighting. You seem to know where the light is on the character, but it just looks too airbrushed and soft. Cell shading/lighting is more eye-catching and like I said, it can make a big difference.
As for the colors, they look great! I like the way you make his coat have a little more of a blue tint near the bottom, and you didn't make the stripes on his coat perfectly straight lines. I also like how you colored his eyes.
So yeah, overall it's pretty good, I only suggest that you try out cell shading. ^_^
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First of all, the colouring was well done and for the background it looks good for an attempt although the positioning of the road seems a bit off but overall it looks good.
I like the way it was drawn in a different perspective, I for one have difficulty doing that and being able to make it look good and passable, and this work is a good example of a person drawn in a different perspective.
Although I did say I liked the colouring, I would love to see this be coloured in a different style just to see how it would turn out.
Overall the piece is very good and just got another fav+.
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Hey,Ā 
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Tough guy. That's what this pic says to me first and foremost. He's softer than most tough guys, like the tough guys most would think of, but he's no less tough in personality and character. Not really familiar with who he is, so if I'm misgendering or in any way misunderstanding him, forgive me.
My only beef with the picture is how the perspective seems ambiguous. His torso suggests one angle while his legs suggest another, while the background suggests yet another. The road also seems to warp a little, perhaps suggesting a turn or a steep hill, but I cannot tell.
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Hey,Ā
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Looks incredible! Personally, I like this one much better than the other one (the one I have a critique on) I hope that's not bad...
I love how the colors are from dark to light, y'know? And the background, just flawless? And the mouth you drew, it's...different than the others I have seen. Which is good, you know, change is better! The shirt has pretty flat-out colors, kind of bland. If you changed the black to a blue or red or something.
Oh, and I like the special touch: the eye-patch. Kind of like a pirate. That's what you were going for right?
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Thanks. Honestly, this was the first time I've tried making a background. I was a little out of my comfort zone, as I am horrible with them. I guess you could say that he is kind of like a pirate since he really does wear one. I tried to use the colors of his actually outfit that he wears in D.Gray-Man when he's not wearing his uniform.
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Welcome back,Ā 
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I really do like this one and you did great shading on that shirt but I think we could have used some more on the rest of his clothing. You got wrinkles down really well but I think shading would be good on clothing a touch more.Ā
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Shading some things is still hard for me
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It looks incredible! ^^ Great job on coloring~
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