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Lavenkitty — Concept: Deliriuus
Published: 2011-06-18 00:33:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 477; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 0
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6/18/11 1:03 AM ESTWoo more color. It's element is poison. I like poison.
xD
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These guys are crazy. And stupid. And idiots.
Monsters woo.
This is old too. I already can tell what I drew wrong but it's fine considering the heads were hard to draw.
I'm coloring it now. <3
Any crit about the design rather than the drawing? D8
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Nay, it's got too many problems to be that.. D8
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D: That's one scary mofo. But pretty epicly done 
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I'm planning on fixing a few things, overall his design it ok just that ring is kinda pointless and does nothing but just for fun I guess haha. xDD
I screwed up on his spines and need to remove the skull hand, or at least make the other one have on too dunno. xD
It's kinda old like October last year old. ( 2010 ) xDD
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Girl. You're improving so much<3 I love how the thing isn't neon (Especially the green), I feel like recently your colors are toning down (Personally, I feel this is a huge step in your color palettes) Those poison hands are great, I wish they were incorporated into the upper part of the design, the pink ring of What Does That Do? sort of splits the designs in half, and it's distracting to me. The poison hands, and their texture is very different from anything on top, and I feel, again, that could be pushed. I feel the skulls aren't doing anything for the design, and seem to be a hamper to the 'biology' of the creature, they reflect well on the shape of the main heads though. The skull hand in particular demonstrates well what I'm talking about. Overall, I feel the shape of the heads could be more solid in form. You've been studying from life, but for this, I feel you can look at the works of and and their approach to form for some ideas of 'building,' as they work with edges a lot. I like how you did incorporate the pink ring color into the eyes of the creature, and wish you had added sort of a casting glow onto the poison hands to tie that together. The horns could use some work, try using a guide line to line up the horns with the features, if they're meant to be 'sliding' in the goop, exaggerate that with 'trail' lines or something of the sort. The drools movement is VERY nice, has a good weight to it. I get lost in the form of the spines in the back, I can't tell if they're sticking out to the side or behind the creature, spiked collars/necklaces are good study material for spikes of that sort. In general, I get lost in several areas of the form, especially in the creatures face, and feel the features are doing a lot of wandering. The colors are a delight to look at, and I really love how you reflected colors in other parts of the creature. I do find this piece to be very successful, despite the things I've pointed out. I hope this wasn't too 'harsh' of a crit, but I know you've been wanting some crit
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Recently I';ve been avoiding neon due to boredom of it. I'm starting to like pastels and very dark and dull colors out of nowhere.
And looking at it I don't even remember what the ring does or why it was there. I drew it and inked it back in November so by now all info on this guy is lost other than the poison element. D8
I'll remove the ring since it bother me too. xD
The skulls again not sure what I was thinking at the time I'll be redrawing this guy again but I wanted to post what it looked like at the time.. And yeah I didn't think of applying life elements into it, it was a mere doodle at the time since it just had been Halloween weeks later. Then one day I decided to ink it then color it earlier. So I should redo this guy when I can, since I drew him without thought. And the horns yeah I don't know why I didn't notice that earlier.. it went past me like it was nothing apparently.. xD
I do the guide line thing nowadays so I should just redraw him to fix all these issues.
It was difficult for me to draw both heads to figure out how to make the spine work. I'm not quite sure about how the spine works but I think what I was going for wasn't correctly done. They were supposed to be from the back of the spine and I made them too visible, thus making them look on the side. I tend to do silly things like that. D8
Nah wasn't harsh, it was the same thing I was wondering for some about but I just went ahead and decided to finish this than to just leave it to sit around like most drawings do. I should just redraw him and fix these errors. Some errors I knew about while others I didn't have a clue. D8
P.S. Those two artists are awesome. 8D
I'm so watching them now. 8D
FFF. You pointed that out and I forgot to add glow to the poison hands.. hah.. I forget things too much.. I usually put a glow to everything.. xDD
They were supposed to glow but I guess my brain derped. xD
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AH WORD WALL. Be careful with the dark palettes, it's making your art hard to 'read' lately D: They come out from the back of the spine? I.. Didn't know it had a spine, haha XD Glad I could reenforce some things
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