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Laremeister ā Patrolling the Spaceship
Published: 2011-02-20 22:17:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 1525; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 33
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Photoshop cs4, wacom bamboo.. Since i broke my thumb 4 weeks ago i have been painting alot..mostly becasue im limited in my other activites.. think i've improved a bit.. here is a more rendered piece, took me about 10 hours maybe.. What do you think, win or fail?Related content
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Overall, you did a really good job with this. It's really crisp, and the lighting effects are really spot on. Everything blends together really well for the most part. There are a few places where there are a few things that are a little off though. The planet in the background kind of just looks cut-off at the edge, like it was just pasted into the picture, which is noticeable when you look at the light coming from behind it. Also, the ship in the background area becomes a little more blurry and less rendered -- it's just a little different from how you did the front area of the ship and the robot. It's not that noticeable though.
I'd say, all in all, that this is much more win than fail e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Thanks for the critique! yeah your right, should have spent a bit more time on the planet, feels a bit pasted in. Concerning the ship i actually blured it up a bit afterwords to get an out-of-focus effect, but maybe that was a mistake!
0-1 to me then
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I wouldn't say it was a mistake -- it just doesn't quite match the rest of the picture, but it's a good start
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