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Lanin — Near Slipping Away
Published: 2004-10-19 00:20:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 126; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description Drip, drop
Drip, drop
Life slowly leaving

Tick, tock
Tick, tock
Time is slipping away

Life is slipping away

Plip, plop
Plip, plop
Death is coming nearer

Time is coming to an end

The end is coming closer
Life slowly leaving
Time is slipping away
Death is coming nearer
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Comments: 5

glasss [2004-10-20 05:50:58 +0000 UTC]

I undersatnd but what are you trying to say? Is there a message? It seems like you are just describing an event with no adjectives.

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Lanin In reply to glasss [2004-10-20 22:25:31 +0000 UTC]

it's true the event is being discribed without many adjectives. but it's more that the speaker is hearing the drip, drop and giving their thought on that particular sound.

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glasss In reply to Lanin [2004-10-21 00:16:11 +0000 UTC]

yea onamatepia is a good thing to use but dont u think it needs to be backed up a little more? for a fuller effect?

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glasss In reply to Lanin [2004-10-21 00:16:06 +0000 UTC]

yea onamatepia is a good thing to use but dont u think it needs to be backed up a little more? for a fuller effect?

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Lanin In reply to glasss [2004-10-24 01:33:42 +0000 UTC]

if i wanted a fuller effect yes i would need to back it up but this was scribblings in Alg 3-4 when all the rest of the class was doing nothing but annoying me.

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