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Lance-the-young — Kiyone Comic
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Published: 2007-04-19 02:40:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 3211; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 44
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Something I had in my mind for a while, since I re-watched my Tenchi Universe DVDs. Poor Kiyone never gets a break. ^^Hope you like.
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Poor Kiyone. So stressed that she's in daipers. Very nice little comic you've made up, but in the second frame, I see Kiyone's face is all bent out of proportion, I suggest you work on the angles of faces and heads and how they are positioned to correct this. In the last frame, Kiyones legs look like they're being chopped off by her daipers, try to work abit more on body positions, ok? But overall, it's a damned silly comic and cute, should defenately try and practice more on makeing comics, you've got a great sense of humor. ^ ^
-James Daly
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Thanks. ^^ I'll work on what you mean, but for the last panel being cut off at the bottom, that was just because I was low on page space.
I always enjoy Kiyone. For the life of her, she'll never get a break. Thanks for the detailed comment. ^^
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Pleasure to bring happiness to those who need it, my friend. ^ ^
-James Daly
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Yay! Thanks alot. *hugs*
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yay you're welcome *hugs back* >w<
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Aww yay, it's been a while since you've doen any with these two. It's always fun to see Kiyone and Mihoshi!
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That's true, I felt bad about not seeing them. They're so much fun. ^^
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Y'know, wearing some pants or a skirt or something over her diapers might increase her confidence. Then again, it'd make checking harder...
For some reason, I got a Revolver Ocelot vibe from the first line. It's sounds like what he says to his bosses during the endings.
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Not familiar with Ocelot.
Heheheh, I have the feeling Mihoshi is the one who dresses her and thinks she looks cute without pants. ^^
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Hehe, poor Kiyone. Is that black box supposed to be there? Maybe it's my computer
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Oh no! Wait, that's not all bad
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Heheheh. She'll never get out of this place, trapped on Earth in diapers. ^^
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