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Laila-chan — JK fanfic - Ryu by-nc-nd

Published: 2009-02-12 01:24:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 1115; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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Description Chapter one

She was born in Wa [倭]. She was sick from the birth and without any visible reason she was getting worse every year. Doctors didnt gave her more then 15 years of life.
She could hardly see, when she was small. She was completely blind at he age of 3. So she almost couldnt remember, how color looks like. Only in deams she could see something, and didnt know what.


Her health state became even worse when she turned 11. She was hospitalized in local hospital. She couldnt breath properly and her heart became even weaker.
She wanted to end it, but becouse of her parents, she didnt do anything.
Thats when it appeared. In dark night of full moon. While she was laing at hospital bed, something broke window and got into room. Hana didnt feel fear. There was nothing she feared. Not even death.


She asked: "Who is it?" but she could hear only cry and strange steps - as if dog is walking toward her. She could feel arm on her head and more noise from window - as if huge bird was there. She wasnt suprised either. It took some time, but she realized that she can feel something strange. Very sad thoughts vere flowing into her mind. It had to be something as bound between her and "something". She got curious and started to touch it. She figured that it was woman with fur on shoulders. Than woman took her into arms.


"Wait," said Hana and she took off dropping funnel off her hand. Then she asked for paper on the table. Something was telling her, that she is going somewhere, and wont come back anymore.


She wrote: "Dear mum and dad. Dont be sad. I am going on my journey now. I love you. Hana." she knew, its hardly readable ,but it didnt matter now. "We can go." she wanted to add Please, carry me, but her visitor did it without a word and jumped form the window.


Hana never flew before and it was something wonderful. They flew about half an hour and then she could smell sea.


She didnt want to break silence, but her curiosity won: "We are flying oversea?" Her guaidance replyed with gentle, still little shaky voice, "No. We are going to enter shoku. Nyosens and lady Gyokuyou are waiting for you."


She fell asleep in nyokais  [女怪] arms. She couldnt know, that when she was taken to Mount Hou, her human part fell off. Her life was in big danger, and Goddness "Mother Nature" had to cure her illness gained from bad food and all blood around her in Wa.


After long sleep she opened her eyes. She shout of in surprise: "I can see!"

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Comments: 4

Lumo-chan-223 [2013-04-11 21:45:39 +0000 UTC]

I may write a 12 kingdom fanfic, too. But my version is also based on an taika Kirin, and he is the Hou one.

His taika name is Hachiyama Takaramaru. The translation of his name means "perfect treasure in the eight mountains"' and I intend the number 8 to play a large role in his life.

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Laila-chan In reply to Lumo-chan-223 [2013-06-13 12:45:29 +0000 UTC]

Go for it Post a link, please

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EliashM [2009-02-12 09:40:40 +0000 UTC]

Oh so complex. I must work on mine too.

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Laila-chan In reply to EliashM [2009-02-13 01:03:10 +0000 UTC]

I got s lt from reading novels. My own ideas added of course. Finally done. Mistakes corrected (maybe)

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