Comments: 21
Xepharon [2008-02-03 12:13:12 +0000 UTC]
I'm not one to be able to critique really, my own skills are...well i'm fairly new and novice to drawing myself. So I say darn good picture, Love the texture, the shading, and the idea. Favorited!
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kyrio In reply to Q99 [2008-01-05 01:31:39 +0000 UTC]
there's more than one window/light source. Which I guess means I should have some of the characters' shadows showing, but eh. XP
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kyrio In reply to Dayantis [2008-01-05 01:32:07 +0000 UTC]
CUZ I'M NOT YOU! Advanced burnination, complete! X3
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MOOMANiBE [2008-01-04 18:48:30 +0000 UTC]
You know I think it's the awesomes, even if you don't XD
If I had to say one flaw, it'd be that you have a BG in perspective but you cut off the characters rather than placing them in it. Generally, one puts a "fake perspective" BG with that sort of cutoff, in my experience. It's not a HUGE deal, but the fact that you've given the BG such dimension makes the characters seem paper-cutoutish because they're not given a concrete position within the background.
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kyrio In reply to MOOMANiBE [2008-01-04 19:04:57 +0000 UTC]
I was going for a photograph-ish look, but I can understand what you mean.
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kyrio In reply to Squato [2008-01-04 18:01:12 +0000 UTC]
ah I think I know what you mean now. No, that's not a mistake, that's his arm.
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kyrio In reply to Squato [2008-01-04 17:58:38 +0000 UTC]
small detail? could you be a tad more specific?
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Ankhareon [2008-01-04 09:38:46 +0000 UTC]
mmm... deliciously contextless
and well drawn too
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kyrio In reply to Ankhareon [2008-01-04 17:58:09 +0000 UTC]
you want context? Backstory on these two can be found here [link]
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kyrio In reply to kyrio [2008-01-05 05:10:35 +0000 UTC]
Vermont is...meticulous in caring for the books. He's grown rather attached to them, actually. Sort of like how a dragon likes to hoard gold XP
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Ankhareon In reply to kyrio [2008-01-05 04:17:16 +0000 UTC]
*reads it*
wow, that's the harshest overdue book fine I've ever seen
still I remain confident hilarity will ensue many times during that period
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grandjackal [2008-01-04 07:11:30 +0000 UTC]
wow, this is looking great! ^-^ one question though....what happened to the dragonguy's right arm? is it bent behind his back? or is it a nub? perhaps it's just my bad vision...
wish i could give an advanced critique, but this is looking great by my eyes and i see no problems ^-^
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kyrio In reply to grandjackal [2008-01-04 07:17:29 +0000 UTC]
it goes behind his back
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grandjackal In reply to kyrio [2008-01-04 07:29:28 +0000 UTC]
ahh. alright then ^-^;; i need contacts or something x.x
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