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Published: 2013-12-01 17:51:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 99; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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Description It is weird how the world works,
or how we all think it works.
How all the events of world,
could have other meanings, deeper meanings.

Last night it started raining,
it rained all through the night.
it is still raining as I type this,
the skies are dark and grey.

The rain can be a beautiful thing,
and at the same time a depressing one.

Reminding us of past memories,
events that shape us into who we are.
The lives that we make,
the lives that we live through.

Its a good place to think,
sitting out in the rain.
It is a good distraction,
and a good way to calm down enough to think.

Everything is different when you are alone.

Its weird to think how much little things mean to you,
how little things can have such big effects on your world.
How a good morning, or good night, can change the outcome of the night,
how just telling someone about your day makes you feel cared for.

Knowing you will have someone to talk to for the day,
without that, you feel alone.

Lost.

It is crazy how one person, out of the thousands upon this wold,
could have such a drastic effect on your life, that sometimes you don't notice.
But when it is gone you can see clearly what was there.
See what all was growing, but you didn't give enough time to bloom.

Why must things fall short of their destination.
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Comments: 14

gymnosophist [2013-12-03 01:12:47 +0000 UTC]


Very astute, very profound, very poignant, very true...

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KyleEricBates In reply to gymnosophist [2013-12-03 02:15:00 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much, I sure do enjoy the feedback you give me.

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gymnosophist In reply to KyleEricBates [2013-12-03 02:46:10 +0000 UTC]

Well, thank you dearly... I'm here to be of help all I can...

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KyleEricBates In reply to gymnosophist [2013-12-03 03:42:54 +0000 UTC]

I appreciate that a lot, thank you.

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gymnosophist In reply to KyleEricBates [2013-12-03 20:10:51 +0000 UTC]

Truly, you're more than welcome...

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KyleEricBates In reply to gymnosophist [2013-12-03 23:45:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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gymnosophist In reply to KyleEricBates [2013-12-04 04:24:45 +0000 UTC]

You're more than welcome...

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GhandaHendryx [2013-12-01 22:55:17 +0000 UTC]

You are doing more structured poems lately, I really that.

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KyleEricBates In reply to GhandaHendryx [2013-12-02 02:31:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh really now? Yeah, Poetry is always nice.

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GhandaHendryx In reply to KyleEricBates [2013-12-02 02:46:40 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, you are great with prose poetry though you don't do it often. I want to see more:I you've gotten tons better!

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KyleEricBates In reply to GhandaHendryx [2013-12-02 05:33:03 +0000 UTC]

Okay I will do that

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6-9Changeling [2013-12-01 21:46:34 +0000 UTC]

I liked reading this! It feels inspirational in a way, to me.

I feel like you'd be good at writing stories :3

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KyleEricBates In reply to 6-9Changeling [2013-12-02 02:33:08 +0000 UTC]

Ha, well thank you I am glad you like it, I will probably be putting more up, I am sure I would love your input Maybe some day I will go off and try to write a story.

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6-9Changeling In reply to KyleEricBates [2013-12-06 00:34:02 +0000 UTC]

I'll gladly leave my input c:

I'll be excited for that day!

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