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Published: 2016-11-16 04:44:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 905; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 6
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YOSHI-day [2016-11-16 16:41:13 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


So, to start I will first mention the good things
1. Kveather, great work! First I needed to know was which character were you drawing and I was able to recognize him. Sure the face may be not perfect but it was recognizably good.
2. I found the picture you used as reference to draw this and seeing how complex it was you pulled it off in a great art style.
3. I also saw some of your other works and this one was one of my favorites since it stands out from your regular works.
Now the bad news
1. First of, you may have done a good technique to do this but you didn't polish it to it's fullest.
2. The blood from the left side isn't as good as on the right side.
3. It seems odd how you used a some sort of brush to paint red certain parts.

I honestly think that all you needed to do was polished this a bit more. It looked too plain to have an impact. BUT please don't let my criticism discourage you. I'm just 15 and I not much of an artist. Overall I give this picture 7/10 please keep on the good work and I hope my criticism helped you in some way.

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Kveather In reply to YOSHI-day [2016-11-16 19:30:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, my friend! I really appreciate your opinion, and will have your tips in mind
the next time I draw.

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YOSHI-day In reply to Kveather [2016-11-17 02:57:16 +0000 UTC]

np I'm glad you liked you liked it

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Freksama [2016-11-18 03:41:51 +0000 UTC]

Nice work! Β  Β  Β 

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Kveather In reply to Freksama [2016-11-18 14:35:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Freksama In reply to Kveather [2016-11-18 17:05:40 +0000 UTC]

Your more than welcomeΒ my friend! Β 

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MadaraTaicho [2016-11-16 21:17:40 +0000 UTC]

the background takes away the impact of the blood or maybe its just me

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Kveather In reply to MadaraTaicho [2016-11-17 12:40:10 +0000 UTC]

It seemed to be a good idea when I painted it, but I think you're right. Thanks for your comment and favourite!

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IndianaZordan [2016-11-16 15:23:40 +0000 UTC]

nice .. but is the blood color same as the background color ?

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Kveather In reply to IndianaZordan [2016-11-16 16:19:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Yes, It is

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TheTubich [2016-11-16 13:18:43 +0000 UTC]

Cool work

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Kveather In reply to TheTubich [2016-11-16 16:20:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, Tubi!

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TheTubich In reply to Kveather [2016-11-16 21:59:04 +0000 UTC]

Welcome

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