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Published: 2006-03-27 22:35:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 9112; Favourites: 218; Downloads: 108
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my new id...a little bit sexiest than usual:
...it's the spring...used a photo as reference...but i really dunno were it comes from...sorry.
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Hello my name is Eric Johnson and I am inviting you to join my group I just created for all artists who love to create Amazing Vectors. amazing-vectors.deviantart.comโฆ
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Fist of all thanks you all to have spent time lookig at this work of mine...that has been very kind of you!
And my biggest thanks go to people who gave me interesting suggestion and critique.
Feedbacks are always useful to grow up.
This work of mine is a little bit old, and looking at it after time passed, I've had the same impressions as you...it can be done better!
But in my mind the concept idea is still nice!
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that is quite a shocker...
Smart
Very very smart
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I like the concept and the colors. Hope you don't mind a few crits, though, because I've got some suggestions:
1.) Get rid of that JPEG compression. Either save the file as large as possible/as high-quality as possible, or try going to PNG format. Part of the fun of vectors is the clean, crisp lines. The compression along the edges on this piece makes it look mucky.
2.) Watch the composition. The right side reads fine, but the finger doesn't read as well. It looks like a blob. Part of the problem is how close the the left side of the image the finger is: the negative space doesn't look good. Also, the way the finger runs off the page on a diagonal to the lower left corner draws your eyes down and off the image. Personally, I'd add some more negative space to the left of the image and also tilt the finger at an angle away from the lips to enhance the sense of motion, that she's pulling her finger away from her lips.
3.) Text. I like how it's coming out of her mouth like that, and the Tasty part comes across clearly. The "v" in vectors is pretty squished, though. You might want to play around with the text shape a bit more.
Hope that gives you some ideas for revamping and/or for future vectors.
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* correction: it'd make more sense for the finger to be tilting toward her lips. Try the same motion yourself and see what I mean.
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My eye focused on the blue first so was heavily confused at first. 
Nicely done!
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wow
thats exactly what happened to me too
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Lovely. It's a strawberry isn't it? I love the drool running down the bottom. lol
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I love it, is simple contrasted and sexy at the same time 
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okay, it mite be that ive been staring at white things up close all day, but i totally did not see it as lips and finger...it just looked like a blue blob with words...and then i saw the lips&finger after i went um y's this blob thingy a dd??? lol
but its certainly interesting XP thou the chin is sorta flat?
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i saw it as lips and finger only after i read your comment. and before i read it, i too saw it as just a blue blob with some kind of red stuff behind it.
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I completely did not see anything in this picture either. 
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The same thing here! I guess I don't understand minimalism ha ha I though maybe it was like a nee joint or something at first haha
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Yeah, that's the problem. Vector art is hard when it's abstract because you really have to hunt to see what it is without the contextual clues traditional media have. That's why most vector stuff is simple and forthright, because people who have to play "Where's Waldo" with a vector piece give up and move on, thus negating the whole simplification aspect of vectorization in the the first place. Vector people have to be really careful with this and make sure everything is spot on, even a little thing like the chin can kill a whole image.
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ha ha yeah ... I miss my Illustrator though....
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definitely sexy.. realy like the lips and the saliva ..
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Bellissima: semplice, sexy, grafica. Ti uoccio!
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Aww nice design !! ^^ 
So vectors have a taste huh ? ^^ ( It'd be strawberry or chocolate maybe 
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I have that hunch too that vectors might be strawberry or lime because the colors are vibrant !
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wow! mi si รจ ricreata l'immagine in testa pian piano, a forza di guardarla!
direi alquanto sexy, molto femmiline. e sรฌ, anche e sopratutto "gustosa". brava!
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Il tuo stile nel vettoriale รจ veramente unico, mi piace un sacco, as esempio in questo lavoro adoro la composizione e i colori!!!
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wow the colours had a weird effect on my eyes! 
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Whoooa sexy!! I love the way you designed this, it's really awesome!
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Hey that is pretty sexy. Really professional looking too. I'd buy it.
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