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Kruszewski — Feels Like Home
Published: 2006-08-16 16:27:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 140; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Back to beforeWe’ve gone
Feels so nice
Feels like home
Smile on your face
And the glimmer of your eyes
Out here
(in thesun)
Sound of your voice
Keeping me warm
Let’s keep it this way
The day, not so gray anymore
Feels like home
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Comments: 9
I remember reading this one...
I didn't particularly like this one
but only because i was biased
it made me feel useless
but otherwise, if i step back
then it's a good piece and i shouldnt say bad things about it
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looking back on that...era, persay,
i guess it was a bit of an over reaction,
but the piece itself,
it's...i don't know
you had every right to be,
this site isn't the ideal place the talk about the logistics of that time.
thanks, though
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...
you're welcome?
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Did you purposefully put no space between "the" and "sun"? Welcome home.
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indeed i did,
with purpose.
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That's what I was going for...
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what are the parenthesis do in poetry? (what effect does it have?)
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i don't know...
that was sort of how i wrote it on the page,
i guess i wanted to capture it
it was a toss up
i almost didnt put it in at all
parenthesis or no
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