Comments: 15
Kurpo [2012-07-12 03:13:08 +0000 UTC]
Redfaceeeeee...! ADFASD
I love her so much, and I especially love how you really set it up for character development!
For better or for worse, right? C':>
And I really like the thought put behind her ability! The double meaning just won me over.
And I really like how you added that anatomy of her bare back with her tail~
I... I just love this awesome character uwu; <3
I wish you the best of luck~!!
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eternanyx [2012-06-22 21:20:02 +0000 UTC]
I like Redface/Breezy's background story. It creates an amazing conflict for the character and really sets the tone. I also like how you've hidden little reminders about Breezy in Redface's design. (Is there double meaning to the ability Mold Breaker?) Out of everything I love Redface's hands the most.
Typos in Background Story: trained is repeated twice, tie should be time.
I would erase the outline of her head in her back view.
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eternanyx In reply to kompy [2012-06-22 22:51:14 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome. I really hope to see the druddgion/hoppip in the group.
Also is Redface normal or shiny? Her body coloring is normal, but her clothing is shiny. It can be very confusing later on.
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kompy In reply to eternanyx [2012-06-22 23:11:55 +0000 UTC]
Well, *she's* normal, her clothes are shiny-themed. I figured it was fine since the rules say different colors are fine as long as you can still tell what pokemon she is.
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eternanyx In reply to kompy [2012-06-22 23:18:00 +0000 UTC]
Hmm... I guess. I'd check with one of the moderators though just to be sure. Usually consistency is best with gijinkas.
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kompy In reply to eternanyx [2012-06-23 01:20:39 +0000 UTC]
Well, it's no big deal. If they ask me to change her colors, I will.
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eternanyx In reply to kompy [2012-06-23 05:07:50 +0000 UTC]
Ok. Well good luck. I hope you get in. ^-^
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Koleyl [2012-06-22 12:58:43 +0000 UTC]
Great character and nice background story.
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