Comments: 22
theMerse [2015-04-05 18:36:35 +0000 UTC]
Wait... I went backwards through the entire comic, and never found out why Silver has GAPS IN HIS TEETH. Is there another comic explaining this?! Time to do some gallery trudging...
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knockabiller In reply to theMerse [2015-04-05 19:35:12 +0000 UTC]
Not yet, that comic is upcoming... well, like, later, rather than sooner, I have to write/make it first and all that
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Clutch45 [2015-03-21 06:32:21 +0000 UTC]
GAHHHA"LKDFHG:S:"DJLKgh;sd It's happening I'm so sorry for my lack of existance! Nonetheless, it's purty
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beadichnoa [2015-03-20 01:47:15 +0000 UTC]
I love the colors! they're so vibrant but don't look too eye-straining, and it's just really fitting all in all. I can't believe you're actually doing a comic heh, I'M SO GLAD
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xLegendCrossed [2015-03-20 00:57:40 +0000 UTC]
So I didn't get to comment on this yesterday (God damn college and midterms). Anyway, I like the panel format you're using. Not too janky/all over the place, but not too strict with line placement either. I like the text color you associated with Silver, however your top panels are to empty with all the black. Even a lighter gray (40%) would look better, or even randomly floating objects orbiting around Silver. I understand you're trying to represent despair or bleakness, but there are more efficient ways, such as vortexes, or a swirling pit of fire, or floating cars/Debris like I said earlier.
Overall, nicely done.
I expect a comic page every day otherwise I'm unwatching you forever. lol
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knockabiller In reply to xLegendCrossed [2015-03-20 02:19:39 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!
I'm not trying to represent bleakness or despair, actually. Just emptiness.
Now that I think about it... Maybe I could have filled the panels better, like zooming in a bit closer, but I had a reason for making it so empty at least... It'll be explained a few pages from now
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KenotheWolf [2015-03-19 16:07:33 +0000 UTC]
Im so jealous... D:
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TimeturnerJasmy [2015-03-19 14:36:37 +0000 UTC]
GOTTA FAV IT ALLasdfghjkl I love this so much already!
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sonicxjones [2015-03-19 12:54:33 +0000 UTC]
~One the day we arrive on the planet, and blinking step into the sun.......~
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MeetJohnDoe [2015-03-19 04:38:28 +0000 UTC]
Yes! Yes! Yes! I love it! What happens next...
Or the other side of me...
NO! Silver don't go towards the light!!! Don't die on us!
Plus did he lose his powers for a short time or, something else?...
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knockabiller In reply to MeetJohnDoe [2015-03-19 04:43:00 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!
He's not lost his powers... yet
I'll explain the vapory hand things soon, it would be a spoiler to do it now lol
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