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kiwiootori β€” Unspoken
Published: 2014-03-04 00:11:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 1471; Favourites: 56; Downloads: 0
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Description For the love

I never shared.


For the things

I'll never tell.


For all the secrets

Big and small.


For the times

I ignored the calls.


For all the words

I left unspoken.


I'm now drowning

In my emotions.

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Comments: 21

DEVIANTBEBS981 [2014-09-24 12:19:13 +0000 UTC]

for some reason i cant find the words to say....speechless..

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kiwiootori In reply to DEVIANTBEBS981 [2014-09-24 22:43:51 +0000 UTC]

Β 

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Chiolla [2014-08-19 19:48:23 +0000 UTC]

I simply love it very true

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kiwiootori In reply to Chiolla [2014-08-21 23:12:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm glad you like it!

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feelthesky [2014-07-23 15:49:58 +0000 UTC]

I love how it's so simple and how it captures exactly how I feel sometimes. Great work!

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kiwiootori In reply to feelthesky [2014-08-05 23:11:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Polkadotdestroyer [2014-03-13 05:57:35 +0000 UTC]

I cannot find the words to tell you, how beautiful this piece is.Β 
All I can do is show you through the words that I can comprehend,Β 
and just hugs from the internet.Β 
From one poet to another,
it is a quiet battle we fight, and words we do not see fitΒ 
to say to some.Β 
~Justin

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kiwiootori In reply to Polkadotdestroyer [2014-03-14 00:03:34 +0000 UTC]

Β Β 

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Polkadotdestroyer In reply to kiwiootori [2014-03-14 00:24:50 +0000 UTC]

(smiles)Β 

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ArsenicalLady [2014-03-06 20:13:38 +0000 UTC]

This is very wonderful.

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kiwiootori In reply to ArsenicalLady [2014-03-07 00:04:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you~

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BnWRocks [2014-03-06 07:24:05 +0000 UTC]

Wow. This is really great. You capture what a lot of people go through. This is another great work.Β 

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kiwiootori In reply to BnWRocks [2014-03-07 00:04:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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EmeraldGuardian-04 [2014-03-04 21:35:02 +0000 UTC]

I feel you. I love this piece. It's just so.. Relatable, in life.

JUST
You're so good at poetry!! HOW CAN YOU--

And it's a good thing you write, too. Good to express your emotions/thoughts before pressure goes down.. >.<

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kiwiootori In reply to EmeraldGuardian-04 [2014-03-04 22:28:22 +0000 UTC]

I don't think I'm that great, but thank you so much!Β  Β Β  Β 
And yeah, writing is amazing, I can just bleed onto the paper and let stress and emotions go!

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PutridRaven [2014-03-04 05:30:56 +0000 UTC]

yes, indeed very true and very real... and with regret(as I see). You know? It is never too late to "speak" these things. I thought the same and then I was like "wait. why does it have to be like that, when I can choose how I want it to be?"

Speak your mind and your heart and you will find out who actually wants to stand by you

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kiwiootori In reply to PutridRaven [2014-03-04 15:45:35 +0000 UTC]

Truth once again. If only I could.

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PutridRaven In reply to kiwiootori [2014-03-04 17:27:53 +0000 UTC]

you always can no matter how impossible it seemsΒ 

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XdarkXnXdeadlyX [2014-03-04 02:31:33 +0000 UTC]

very true and real.Β  Good job!

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kiwiootori In reply to XdarkXnXdeadlyX [2014-03-04 15:45:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you~

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XdarkXnXdeadlyX In reply to kiwiootori [2014-03-04 21:22:07 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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