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Brooklyn96 [2019-11-25 16:48:07 +0000 UTC]
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KingNanamine87 In reply to Brooklyn96 [2019-11-25 16:51:45 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, i'm not so expert in mobiles but thanks. XD
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Neo-Byzantium [2019-11-25 01:50:37 +0000 UTC]
Sheele's lovely as always and looks great with her nice long stocking covered legs crossed. I'd LOVE to have her as a girlfriend and later, a wife or at least a good friend.
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jedi7000nathan In reply to Neo-Byzantium [2019-11-25 21:12:28 +0000 UTC]
Tatsumi's lucky to have her as one certainly in Empire's End: Yes I'm back and at it now or will be when I get the new wireless mouse because I misplaced mine and I can't write without it because I can't do grammar checks yet
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Neo-Byzantium In reply to jedi7000nathan [2019-11-26 01:48:00 +0000 UTC]
Agreed. It's one of the reasons why I like your story so much, it gives Sheele a happy ending with Tatsumi.
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jedi7000nathan In reply to Neo-Byzantium [2019-11-26 04:52:48 +0000 UTC]
That is true but of the OG Night Raid characters from Empire's End she's not going to give up her way as an assassin; its her career and she's still the leader of an Assassin's Order too: it allows me to put her in some interesting situations for Galaxy at War as she will be one of the representitives from Eden to the Senate: trust me there will be no shortage of plots that Palpatine has that get thwarted by her: If anything she's the actual leader of the New Night Raid who does all the management where Air is the leader that leads them in combat: and Sheele being his Spymaster is actually superior in rank to Air: point being while Sheele does keep her air-headed persona in public she's a master schemer and manipulater that Palpatine underestimates to his peril (Granted his force powers would keep her in an even fight if they ever did fight but still Sheele is so fast that even Palpatine's force enhanced reflexes would be pressed to keep up and impossible if she chooses to use her Armor's trump card that puts her at the speed of a bullet) and will be a constant factor he has to account for in ANY plans he makes because if there is one political player that's scarier then Tatsumi in the Imperial court its Sheele and that's counting Aria and Esdeath. Point being Palpatine is in a no win scenario against Tatsumi in that there is no tool in his arsenal that can remove Tatsumi as a threat: try assassinating the guy, he's got an entire fortified palace complex in between assassins, his inner circle is armed, his protected by 14 bodyguards that are the Empire's best, in addition to his harem that's also armed to the teeth, and on top of it all you have Tatsumi himself, clad in Dwarven armor daily and with his God-Tier Teigus ready at a moment's notice due to modifications made to his bracelet by the dwarves that allows him access to his weapons on command, there is no killing Tatsumi: not even in a battle: Air will basically near stomp Dooku on Geonosis (Not maim him but do some good damage and cause him to lose something far more important then limbs, something Sidious will not be pleased in him losing) and Air by this point is about as good as Tatsumi is at the moment in EE so far, by the time of Galaxy at War Tatsumi is an absolute powerhouse and has killed two very powerful Arch Demons in their true demonic forms (In addition to stomping a Dwarven Mecha) throwing Dooku at Tatsumi would be about as lopsided as 'canon' Esdeath vs Bloom which I hope you read that story: I didn't realize when I wrote it and looked at the facts how much of a stomp it would be and I only gave Bloom a fraction of her current power level (Tatsumi when he is reborn in Erasiel's Universe is on her level in mirror only he has more magic types avalible then her) Tatsumi in Empire's End near mirrors her without magic. Also I'm not even factoring in Erasiel Darkar: doing that would be completely unfair considering the fact that Palpatine fighting Erasiel is the equivalent of a man fighting a godΒ and in Erasiel's words "When Gods fight, Mortals die" Erasiel's power level is a low 0 on the scale with Asha being a high 0 and in their universe there are beings more powerful then them.
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Neo-Byzantium In reply to jedi7000nathan [2019-11-26 21:11:33 +0000 UTC]
I can easily imagine Sheele remaining an assassin as it's her line of work but she'll be using it for noble purposes as always. Despite her appealing ditzy self being a front, I also find her sly calculating side to be appealing too as I know her to be noble at heart. I seem to imagine her being a good and caring mother to her and Tatsumi's children and a nice stepmother to Tatsumi's other children.Β
It's about time someone wrote Palpatine as being no match for someone in the cunning department. For far too long, he's been portrayed as being super cunning and ten steps ahead of everyone else in the prequels and well into the Imperial Era.
About what Dooku loses to Air on Geonosis which isn't one of his limbs, it's the Death Star plans I'm guessing? Sidious definitely would be angry at Dooku for losing them.
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jedi7000nathan In reply to Neo-Byzantium [2019-11-26 23:10:47 +0000 UTC]
Yep: and this is to keep the CIS from being able to build one post war; when a Death Star is built it won't be at full power: just the level needed to blow up ships and act as a mobile fleet station (The station actually has Star Destroyer hangers) and at the same time avoid any outcry
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Neo-Byzantium In reply to jedi7000nathan [2019-11-27 02:51:59 +0000 UTC]
That works out well then plus the Republic will have a great superweapon to use when the Yuuzhan Vong come a knocking in the future.
To avoid some maniac seizing the Death Star and setting it to full power though, there should be a special security code and DNA identification system installed in the Death Star's computer so only a very few people can authorize it being set on full power.
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jedi7000nathan In reply to Neo-Byzantium [2019-11-27 03:44:48 +0000 UTC]
Already got that planned out, the main Kybar crystal that powers the weapon will be of a grade that sets its max power at the basic shots taken by it in Rogue One or at Endor. There are alternative designs too; also a certain weapons satellite will cause a ruckuss as a certain family gang tries to take power in the underworld after the demise of the Hutt Cartel; the Trigon 1
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Neo-Byzantium In reply to jedi7000nathan [2019-11-27 05:21:44 +0000 UTC]
Good to hear about the Death Star and when built, be sure not to give it the glaring design flaw that caused its destruction in canon, make it's thermal exhaust system like that of the 2nd Death Star which had countless tiny vents from what I remember about what the 2nd Death Star was like.Β
Also, I imagine that if they have to destroy planet sized targets for some reason, they can plant a better grade kybar crystal into the superlaser mechanism.Β
What's the Trigon 1 and what family gang are you talking about?
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jedi7000nathan In reply to Neo-Byzantium [2019-11-27 06:31:23 +0000 UTC]
The Fromm Family: Size Fromm was the Galaxy's most influential gangster prior to Jabba rising to full dominance in the criminal underworld, he held a sizeable amount of power and money, in addition to having the ability to field armies of clones of his fellow Anno-dat blue he also finances his son Tigg Fromm's scientific inventions, Tigg invented the Trigon 1 as a means to have the Fromm family rise as a galactic power the equal of the Empire using droids of his own design (Fromm Tower Droids) and his ultimate weapon the Trigon 1: a manned weapon satellite the same size as a corvette but with full weapons power capable of destroying an entire planet. All this by the way is not my invention, this is old EU from the Droids Cartoon where the Fromms are the main villains of the first four episodes with their plans in the end foiled by C3PO and R2-D2 with them being dragged away at the end of the fourth episode by Boba Fett (Whom Tigg Fromm double crossed by planting a thermal detonator on his speeder: in addition to costing him his personal combat droid BL-17 which was a CIS Battle Legionnaire Droid (A battle droid that looks like a normal C-series protocol droid but is a deadly battle droid as smart as T-series Tactical Droid) that Boba owned, in addition to Boba's Silver Speeder and nearly his own life) Moral of the Fromm arc overall that I took away was: Don't double cross Boba Fett it always ends badly for you.
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Neo-Byzantium In reply to jedi7000nathan [2019-11-27 10:10:35 +0000 UTC]
The Fromms sound like they're going to be a problem once the Hutt Cartels fall from power but I'm sure that Tatsumi and the others can handle them. Don't forget that Black Sun is also around and will be on the rise thanks to Prince Xizor /whose my favourite Star Wars gangster for various reasons/.
Anyhow, you should have CIS forces aid the Republic, Tatsumi and the others in ending the threat of the Fromms to further improve relations between the Republic and the CIS plus the Fromms sound like they're going to be as much of a threat to the CIS as they'll be to the Republic.Β
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spiralmaestro [2019-11-24 19:59:55 +0000 UTC]
Very nice. I get a Mrs. Robinson from "The Graduate" feel each time I see these legs crossed artworks you've drawn in the past.
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