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KimRaiFan — Bounce Test - PLZ CRITIQUE
Published: 2009-06-29 20:49:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 979; Favourites: 39; Downloads: 18
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I simply can't make a good-looking bounce.
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It would be nice if some of you will critique, some tips would be very useful...
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well this is my critque of the month
the emoticon is simply lovely and cute.the expression just fits right in.But one thing i have to say is that every time i see it jump up and down it doesnt much look like its jumping.Instead from my point of view its as it being pulled up and pushed down by gravity.
and the speed of the emote should be just bit bit more speedier to mkae it look more jumping effective.but everything else is just marvalous.
the animation 3D effects i love it.but keep on trying and you'll keep on improving and i hope that this critque would help in the future.
that is my review ^^
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Hmm... a Critique you say? My pleasure! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="26" height="18" alt="
This is a very cute Emote, and to start with the basics, the shading and expression are very good. The shading is subtle, yet very 3D, and the face perfectly conveys the sheer joy of a good jump. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l… " width="19" height="19" alt="
On to animation - the landing and jumping is very good, especially as the face squishes out. The only thing I would say, is that the rotation at the top isn't very smooth, perhaps speeding the entire piece up, then adding more frames? If not, maybe just leave him floating for a while longer, and give him more time to turn?
Nevertheless, a great little emote, and all the best for the future! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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No problemo!
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Thanks
And don't worry
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Aw n.n
o: I've loved your avatar *-*
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thank you once again xD
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near the peak, it seems like he speeds up a bit, but other that that its great
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only God knows how I set frame delays
orther than that, thanks
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So I herd GIMP is free.
But I've nevah tryed it.
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oooh, this is adorable.
<3 this
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all i can say is it would be epic if it was just like one continuous bounce, instead of BOINGGGGGGG bop BOINGGGGGG etc.
but thats just my thought... you may ahve wanted it that way
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yes
I tought about that
but I tryed a landing as well
anyway, thanks for pointing that out
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I don't I have no critic haha it's pretty good
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E grozav!Scz,da nu prea ma pricep la critic... XD Totusi e animatie tare!
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