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Description Hot Head: Mommy, Mommy, Mommy! Ca–

Candle: Quiet down Hot Head. Mommy's got a migraine.

Hot Head: Sorry.

Candle: What do you want?

Hot Head: Can we go play outside? I wanna try flying!

Candle: Hot Head, we've been over this before. Mommy and Daddy can't fly so we can't teach you.

Hot Head: Well can't we go outside?

Candle: Ask your father.

Hot Head: *shakes head*

Candle: Why not? 

Hot Head: *mumbles and kicks at the floor*

Candle: *rubs her temples* You really want to fly, huh?

Hot Head: *nods*

Candle: *sighs* I suppose we could get you flight lessons.

Hot Head: Really?

Candle: Why not? Let me just ask your father. *mumbles* Like that'll do anything. *walks out of her room to find Flashpoint*

Hot Head: Yay!

Candle: Flashpoint dear? Where are you? *spots him at the counter doing bills* Ah, there you are.

Flashpoint: What is it?

Candle: Our son wants to learn how to fly so–

Flashpoint: Tell him we went over this. We can't teach him how to fly.

Candle: I'm not finished. Our son wants to learn how to fly so I was thinking we could send him up to Cloudsdale for flying lessons.

Flashpoint: Do you have any idea how expensive that will be? He can't have flying lessons.

Candle: Dear–


Flashpoint: Money's tight right now, dear. He doesn't need to know how to fly anyways.

Candle: Fine *rolls eyes* You heard your father. Come Hot Head. Let's go outside.


Hot Head: *follows Candle to their yard*

Candle: Alright. We're outside. Go play or whatever.

Hot Head: But I wanna play with you...

Candle: Hot Head, I already told you Mommy has a migraine.

Hot Head: ...............

Candle: Aaaaand you don't know what that means. What I meant to say is that Mommy has a really bad headache right now.

Hot Head: Ooooh...

Candle: I'll be right here. Go play with your toys.

Hot Head: Mmkay...

Candle: Good boy.

Hot Head: *trots off and starts picking up some of his toys*

Candle: *starts drifting off to sleep*
__________________________

Hot Head: *starts screaming and crying*

Candle: *wakes up* Huh? Wha? *sees Hot Head curled up on the ground* Hot Head! Sweetie are you okay?

Hot Head: M-mommy *holds out hoof that's bleeding*

Candle: What did you do?

Hot Head: I-I was trying to fly so I jumped from that tree and–

Candle: You jumped from the tree??? Hot Head are you crazy???

Hot Head: I-I'm sorry, Mommy. I just really–

Flashpoint: What's going on out here?

Candle: *stands up keeping Hot Head under her*

Flashpoint: *sees Hot Head's hoof* What did you do??? Are you going to have to go to the hospital again. If you do I swear to Celestia–

Candle: Dear, leave him alone.

Flashpoint: Stand up boy!

Hot Head: *stands up keeping little pressure on his hoof*

Flashpoint: Good. You're costing us so much money with all your hospital trips

Candle: It wasn't his fault. I fell asleep and wasn't watching him.

Flashpoint: Of course. I should've known. In the future make sure to keep an eye on your son.

Candle: My son?

Flashpoint: Yes your son! You gave birth to him!

Candle: Excuse me but you're the one who wanted a foal in the first place! You know very well I didn't want any kids!

Flashpoint: You never said that!

Candle: Yes I did! You never listen! Look, bottom line is he is just as much your son as he is mine. Having a foal is a team effort!

Flashpoint: I don't have time for this. I'm going inside. *walks away*

Candle: Don't just walk away from me!

Flashpoint: *continues walking*

Candle: Whatever. *turns attention back to Hot Head*

Hot Head: *shaking*

Candle: I'm sorry you had to see that Hot Head. Are you okay?

Hot Head: *nods*

Candle: Do you need to go to the hospital?

Hot Head: *shakes head*

Candle: Are you sure? Don't just say that because of what dad said about the hospital. You're more important. Can you stand on your leg?

Hot Head: *puts more weight on his leg and winces* Yes

Candle: ................. okay.... Let me go get you a bandage for that cut

Hot Head: Mommy......?

Candle: Yes? What do you need?

Hot Head: Do you... not want me?

Candle: Oh Hot Head... Look, when me and and your father got married, I didn't want kids. That's true. But that doesn't mean I don't want you now. Okay?

Hot Head: What about daddy?

Candle: ............................... I.... don't know. I'm sure he cares. But he's been very concerned about money lately. He's trying his best to make sure that we get by.

Hot Head: Okay.........

Candle: Now sit right here, okay? I'm going to get you a bandage.

Hot Head: *nods*

***************************

A very fiery family

This little accident is why Hot Head wears tape on his leg. He had actually broken it and didn't treat it fast enough so the bone didn't heal properly. Without the extra support that the tape supplies, Hot Head has a limp.

 At least 1/4 of the orphans' parents had to be buttholes XD

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Comments: 295

Cooleodavis16 [2019-05-31 19:50:25 +0000 UTC]

I will smack this flashpoint guy across the face for his actions and whose with me on that one?

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PurpleWolfPuppy [2019-04-01 16:43:16 +0000 UTC]

So Hot Head was given up for adoption because his parents couldn't afford to take care of him, right?

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Camilladrawz625 [2019-01-13 03:25:18 +0000 UTC]

Poor child.Candle has every right to be mad at her husband, too

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ufodogs [2017-07-18 20:41:37 +0000 UTC]

Why I almost cry while reading the description?

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meganhulan [2017-07-17 03:36:56 +0000 UTC]

love the truth here

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Cutepegasister121 [2017-04-05 00:10:31 +0000 UTC]

he's like if the FieryJoker was an earth pony

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Flower-shy-15 [2017-04-01 21:33:15 +0000 UTC]

can get  permission to make base ?

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Pwrcat70 [2016-12-03 14:51:30 +0000 UTC]

Is this why they abandoned him?

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whuh [2016-11-19 19:14:19 +0000 UTC]

uh... looks like this is lacking a bit of consistency... who in their right mind as a parent would say "I DIDN'T WANT KIDS" in front of their child...? and then act like they care. lol, ok...

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GirlThatLikesStuffs In reply to whuh [2018-06-16 15:45:19 +0000 UTC]

Probably an irresponsible parent? 

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whuh In reply to GirlThatLikesStuffs [2018-06-17 12:18:49 +0000 UTC]

haha, strange that i've been getting so many replies to very old comments lately.

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Kay1314 [2016-08-26 07:32:21 +0000 UTC]

   

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Ch00ky [2016-08-07 16:01:47 +0000 UTC]

Candle is so beautiful <3 *dashes to fanart*

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jennawenna [2016-08-06 00:13:44 +0000 UTC]

I can relate to this. Candle reminds me of my mom, I'm hot Head and FlashPoint is my X step dad.. sorry for making it sad but it just hit a cord with me.but I love how you make stories with your pictures! I guess what I'm trying to stay I love your work and what you out in it. You make stores that touch the heart : 3 keep up the good work.

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assainwolf9 [2016-07-10 08:53:04 +0000 UTC]

I like candle :3 shes so nice

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InsidiousFlair [2016-06-21 16:45:44 +0000 UTC]

Still can't believe how pretty Candle is 👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Morlon01 [2016-06-20 15:57:56 +0000 UTC]

I can see why he ends up in the orphanage. Poor little fellow, tho :/.

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mrhistorybuff [2016-06-13 08:08:04 +0000 UTC]

Me and my brother have actually witnessed arguments between our mom and our father this way it's a was pretty bad it was money there was a lot of fighting and divorce luckily the fighting didn't get physical I don't remember what happened exactly but there was a lot of arguing over the phone and a lot of he-said she-said yes but back on memories I understand you were going for a slice of Life thing butt this may be a little too much sorry for dumping on you like that I apologize but what you did here is a very accurate representation of a struggling family that is going through financial trouble I am actually know what that's like so you got that pretty be nailed down pretty good again I'm sorry I had to I'm sorry I dumped on you guys like that sorry for the weird way this is spelled or anything or lack of punctuation I'm using a speech to text and it doesn't really recognize my monotone voice and I didn't get through school very well that's why I use it instead of spelling with a keyboard or anything.

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ScooterDracon [2016-05-24 13:25:58 +0000 UTC]

*picks up Hot Head and snuggles him*

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Randomfoxgirl [2016-05-04 18:22:37 +0000 UTC]

Poor thing.

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skythecryingwolf [2016-04-02 00:46:09 +0000 UTC]

Hmm. Hot head is a lot like me having to live with a limp for something he did that he knew he couldn't

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Wagusad [2016-03-23 19:56:36 +0000 UTC]

i like this story could u give me a link to more about them.

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lifelockedinsanity [2016-03-11 18:08:07 +0000 UTC]

I love Candle's design

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star3catcher [2016-03-11 11:29:03 +0000 UTC]

What I got out of this is that Equestria doesn't have universal healthcare!

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Sanluris [2016-03-10 19:19:05 +0000 UTC]

They're Earth ponies though, and Flashpoint said she gave birth to him...did they have a foal artificially, like with a donor, so he was a pegasus?

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star3catcher In reply to Sanluris [2016-03-11 11:29:43 +0000 UTC]

The episode "Baby Cakes" of MLP said that ponies can be born as races other than their parents' if their parents have members of those races somewhere in their ancestry.

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Sanluris In reply to star3catcher [2016-03-13 19:10:40 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah! I forgot about that for some reason.

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Stormwolf35 [2016-03-05 02:31:24 +0000 UTC]

 

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IvyTail20 [2016-01-30 21:10:28 +0000 UTC]

       

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Joanie297 [2016-01-25 01:54:13 +0000 UTC]

aww poor Hot Head. I can't believe his parents had the nerve to try to claim him back later…..

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Wagusad In reply to Joanie297 [2016-03-23 19:57:24 +0000 UTC]

wait what?! link me to that plz i cant find it.

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Firefly-Frost In reply to Wagusad [2016-06-12 19:33:06 +0000 UTC]

Did they give him to the orphanage to save money because i wanna know where thats from too.

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Wagusad In reply to Firefly-Frost [2016-06-13 19:09:14 +0000 UTC]

idk

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MomentumCrisis [2016-01-24 06:48:54 +0000 UTC]

You make such heart breaking stories mahn, its hard to get to my soft side but this kind o stories are my kryptonite.

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XxAstroFoxxX [2016-01-20 00:32:35 +0000 UTC]

im trying to not cry

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Patilion [2015-12-29 13:10:54 +0000 UTC]

 

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Monkeyrofl901 [2015-12-20 06:41:26 +0000 UTC]

Flashpoint has a date with my good friend Mr. Baseball Bat.

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w0lf333 In reply to Monkeyrofl901 [2016-01-07 19:43:59 +0000 UTC]

hey mine to

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juneopal10 In reply to w0lf333 [2016-01-10 17:32:17 +0000 UTC]

He has a appointment with my fist

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EngineGear In reply to juneopal10 [2016-01-19 18:08:01 +0000 UTC]

*summons Star Platinum* ORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORORAORA ORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORORAORA....ORAAAA!!!! Anata wa hontōni watashi o okora semashita, furasshu pointo(You really pissed me off, Flashpoint.)

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juneopal10 In reply to EngineGear [2016-01-20 01:55:34 +0000 UTC]

Yes he did *Luna sends him to the moon*

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KamiGamer In reply to juneopal10 [2016-01-19 05:31:17 +0000 UTC]

Wait so he's a playa now? I'm confused.

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juneopal10 In reply to KamiGamer [2016-01-20 01:54:50 +0000 UTC]

No he's really making me mad the way he's talking to my favorite character's son

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MoonMoonNo [2015-12-12 01:26:57 +0000 UTC]

aw so sad

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minecraftponiez [2015-11-07 11:48:18 +0000 UTC]

I love candles design. She is very pretty.

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MoonMoonNo In reply to minecraftponiez [2015-12-12 01:27:12 +0000 UTC]

trrue 

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BillieDoodlez [2015-10-10 09:39:22 +0000 UTC]

Reminds me of my family and I... ;w;

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ollyvo [2015-10-07 03:40:48 +0000 UTC]

this is so sad 

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1-Ask-Crow-Feather-1 [2015-09-16 19:52:04 +0000 UTC]

This is like my family........

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iiFanGirlOfFhaf In reply to 1-Ask-Crow-Feather-1 [2015-10-05 10:52:13 +0000 UTC]

same but i dont like to go outside

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