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Published: 2005-06-30 09:34:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 3386; Favourites: 128; Downloads: 472
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Your breathcaught in my throat
before the train's last call
Stations and railways
countries and borders
each pass one to another
and you to I
and I
carry your whisper now
on my tongue
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Comments: 45
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This is fantastic. The frailty of her frame is just heartbreaking yet uplifting simultaneously. Good job here.
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i like the rib bones... makes me wonder whether she has any breasts... *gushes
i know the focus is not bout that, but it's distractingly beautiful. the somewhat malnourished body with the outrageous make up.
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Reminds me of Man Ray, and I just love it. Good job!
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i feel (physical) pain
when i'm watching
at this
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thanks...about 1/4 sec....
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One of the best gallery I ve ever seen.. thats the demonstration that, thanks god, Blue Black is not the only talented deviant. congratulations.
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Great work! The graininess of the image really works to its' advantage here. Wonderful imagery!
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the pose, the grain, the light, the expression and the make-up .. everything is just perfect !
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Your aggressive use of light is phenomenal, the highlights and shadows, spectacular.
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I love it. words cannot weigh up with that picture, so i better keep my mouth shut of phrases.
Simply great.
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Thanks so much....that means alot to me....
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Very striking . . . powerful. I find being able to see the bones in her chest a little disturbing.
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demands attention for sure. very powerful image, I like the motion. the eye makeup adds to the dramatic effect.
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agreeing with
this spirals through my bones.
has a great elusive and graceful quality about it
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i didn't comment on this
cause i really had nothing to
say to make how i feel adequate
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I cant give any critique but WOW! There is so much to like about this shot. The 'texture' and tones are gorgeous and the slight movement gives it life.. A+++
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its very beautiful and the poem is beautiful 2
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Thank you....and thank you for commenting on the poem...
Haven't written one in awhile...
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well its gd u should write more often
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Um...thanks. I think...
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Yes... that WAS a compliment 
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I use Tr-X because of the grain. Especially in situations where I'm going to allow things to blur.
...and thank you...
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thank you...thank you....
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I adore the light, the grain, the motion. Stunning.
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I love how she just bursts through the frame.
It gives her small stature so much power! and drama!
reminds me of a bursting firecracker. ka-pow!
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I love it! The body of the model is so skinny and andrognous (thatΒ΄s a very good thing to say) Also the movement ...great, as the choice of sepia.
On a more superficial matter: how is the modelΒ΄s haircut? is it an undercut or what?
XOXO
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Very nice.
I like the sense of force and standing fast in the midst of it.
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The photo is a little disturbing..so i like it. The person looks a little like she is wasting away. The poem is very sad and i think that adds a whole new emotion to the photograph. i won't soon forget this one.
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....... i normally find the chest rib bones distracting&somewhat frightening , but here they lend themselves almost as jewelry ... & the shape is echoed in the accoutrement around her eye & the shadows around her mouth which creates a gentle flow for the eye to follow through the piece ...... nice to see alittle touch of accessory ...
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wow
This image its moving....beyond....
amazing...cant tell anything more 
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nice subject but i think a fixed point is missing... ehhmm maybe a sharp space in the face would make the photo better...
but i like it a lot how it is..
greets
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