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Kendra-Paige — Gypsy Glam I
Published: 2012-02-21 21:42:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 1723; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 110
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Model: Michelle GodinezMUA: Natalia Rivera
Wardrobe: Hope Westendorf
The quickest photo shoot I've ever done, haha. Only had ten minutes to photograph the lovely Michelle. Now if only I had a Pocahontas costume lying around somewhere for her to wear.
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I'll give a fair rating on this one since over all it is pretty good as a whole.
For the critique:
The capture is neat and clean, with enough focus on the main focal and depth towards the background. However, this one lack some lighting on the model which is kind of needed in order to make her stand out even more. However, since the 80% of the entire picture is occupied by the model, I think that problem had been compensated somehow, but still, it needs some additional lights.
I also kind of observed that the model kind of lack some expression, she's kind of a little stiff. You should have made her relax her muscles even more when you took this picture, make her pose more naturally.
Light and Expression. Those two are the only problems that I found on this image. The rest are completely okay in my opinion.
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Thank you for the critique! I do agree on the stiff expression - and I probably have the ten minute time limit on shooting to blame for it, haha. Didn't really have much of a chance for her to relax, so we had to make the best of it. If I do work with the model in the future, however, I'll work on having her emote a little better, and perhaps doing a few 'just jump around and dance!' moves to get her to loosen up, haha.
I got a little too close to her in this image, I believe, so stepping back a bit might be a better method in the future.
I see what you mean about light, but I do wonder if the model's skintone and wardrobe might have thrown me off while taking the photograph. I'll try to watch for that next time.
Thanks again for the critique!
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Beautiful! She looks like Pocahontas and princess Jasmine combined!
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Going to have to agree with Marzarret on this one. He said the things I wanted to far better than I could.
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