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Kaz-D — If I Were

Published: 2009-07-23 21:50:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 436; Favourites: 43; Downloads: 0
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Description If I were a painter,
I'd paint your memories,
Your earliest day, and quirky way,
I'd paint you easily.

If I were a poet,
I'd scribble you some lines,
Of flower days, and country ways,
and other loving times.

If I were an author,
Your story I would write,
On every page, a different age,
as you slept alone at night.

If I were a teacher,
I'd give you all I know,
Of classic lit and ancient script,
And language as you grow.

If I were your lover,
I'd love you till the end,
Kiss you first, and quench your thirst,
and hold you while you mend.

But I'm an observer,
In your heart, always a friend.
And there I see, I'll always be,
Anonymous until the end.


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Comments: 14

Pennyh02 [2009-07-24 23:23:48 +0000 UTC]

Love the poem and the picture.

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jamie017 [2009-07-24 00:19:45 +0000 UTC]

Wow,that it a wonderful shot.Subtle blend of colors,very calming....nice job...

jamie

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Kaz-D In reply to jamie017 [2009-07-24 08:42:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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jamie017 In reply to Kaz-D [2009-07-24 21:35:09 +0000 UTC]

you bet...
jamie

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Vidom [2009-07-23 22:06:33 +0000 UTC]

A perfect place for meditation. Perfect time too

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Kaz-D In reply to Vidom [2009-07-23 22:17:31 +0000 UTC]

Yes

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SnapperRod [2009-07-23 22:04:30 +0000 UTC]

I am not a poetry person, but you certainly have a way with words that stirs the mind, even mine. Blend that with your camera skills and together they become a very potent weapon that is used very skilfully.

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Kaz-D In reply to SnapperRod [2009-07-23 22:18:24 +0000 UTC]

I am very honoured that you like it Thank you!

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SnapperRod In reply to Kaz-D [2009-07-23 22:20:20 +0000 UTC]

You should be, the words stirred me, and that don't happen very often. Keep it up

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Kamal-Q [2009-07-23 21:58:08 +0000 UTC]

That poem is amazing - personally I do like stuff that rhymes like this one more

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Kaz-D In reply to Kamal-Q [2009-07-23 22:18:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!! Sometimes I can Rhyme...sometimes not...but either way it's fun to try!

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SchwarzerDrachen [2009-07-23 21:57:11 +0000 UTC]

The last stanza

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Kaz-D In reply to SchwarzerDrachen [2009-07-23 22:19:13 +0000 UTC]

ahh you can relate?

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SchwarzerDrachen In reply to Kaz-D [2009-07-23 22:22:47 +0000 UTC]

I hope so, I just know I think being an observer is one of the hardest things sometimes because it means I have to quiet myself and stop rushing around and that can be hard for me =].

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