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Published: 2017-04-20 21:49:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 590; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 4
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Part of a larger picture I was/am working on for "Draw a Centaur Day" Didn't have time on the day itself, but still wanted to draw some. Posting this WIP to get some feedback before I ink the picture! Really trying to improve my drawings, so any feedback helps. This will be deleted when I post the final version.Related content
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Hmm, the face could use a bit more work, in its current state it is kind of flat and lacks the detail that the rest of the body has. This normally wouldn't be a big deal, but her breast are large, which is fine. However it's the fact that they are probably either the first or second thing you will see in relation to the face is the problem.
I like the detail of the boots on the back feet. I don't know why they are their but it is a nice detail that gives the picture some character.
Other than that I can't super say much about it since it is just a sketch, and certain details that are lacking may be due to that rather than your skills.
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Well she looks very surprised! Taking into consideration that this is a sketch the overall standing figure is good. It's how I've normally seen transformations into centaurs happen shocked look, and unsteadily legs.
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That was the goal! I wanted to show her surprised and a bit unsure of how to stand or move properly.
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Yeah, considering the clothes history you gave me and how frequently transformations could indeed happen. Could she find a way to transform back and How to afford the clothes... I guess you did say the paladin had some money
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Heh, that is very true. Hence the need for the frequent treasure hunting and mercenary work! In this case, they would be able to reverse the transformation I think.
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Ha! They need a potions master or a book about reversing things. Or Gandalf!
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Any of those things would be useful!
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I also heard of a potions master named snape. Or a book?XD
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I love her andvthe anatomy looks good to. Will she fight with her Hands too?
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Thanks. She should be able to continue fighting with her hands. She's more of a spellcaster though, rather than physical combat, and her magic skills shouldn't be affected.
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Oh nice. I love centaurs since hercules
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looks nice, seems like it will turn out well enough, would prefer that she would stand on her hindlegs, but that would defiantly be hard, after all i can't draw to save my life.
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Well, didn't end up with her standing on her hindlegs, but that's largely because the other character is doing that in the final. Thanks for taking the time to help out!
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your welcome, thanks to responding to us plebeians in the peanut gallery.
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I don't consider you guys plebeians. I really appreciate the feedback and support. Without it, I doubt I'd still be keeping up with drawing.
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Glad you like it. Any suggestions on how to improve for final version?
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Well, if she's transforming into a centaur, you should maybe make it where the boots rip off, I'm no pro in logic, but I assume a horse couldn't stand if forced to wear shoes. And then there's the tai, Yoou may want that to be more free rather than braided, I doubt that's part of a TF.
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Thanks for taking the time to give me feedback. The final version is now uploaded and I tried to work in some of your suggestions.
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