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Kasu-Cat — FMA OC: Nicole Tonir

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Description So my FMA OC Nico has got a new style and well...I just wanted to draw her hehe^^

EDIT: Okay I changed the red color of her jacket so a brownish one...oka this still lookes strange because brown does not fit to Nico I think but okay...she is not wearing this jacket for long so..hehe...

2. EDIT: I got her bio, soemhow...it was written very fast so I think I will chan ge some things...I would be thankful about nice criticism^^


CHARACTER PROFILE:

Name: Nicole Tonir
Nicknames: Nico, The Soul Alchemist(given by herself)
Age: 16 when Ed becomes a Statealchemist, 22 at the end of FMA B
D.O.B: May 22nd, 1895(when I am right)
Place of Birth: Senna in the South Area
Residence: Mainly South City, but also in Central City and she is travelling, later she lives in Xing


Occupation: No formal job yet. Secretly she is a scientist/alchemist
Education: Studies at the University of Central City - No specific study program


APPEARANCE


Height: 169 cm
Hair: Straight hair, dark brown
Eyes: Big blue eyes
Skin: A darker tone
Body type: Banana-shaped Body(?), a hollow back, long legs, normal grown breast

Style: Feminine, tries to look “lady-like” but her choice of dark colours and her hatred against dresses just breaks it a little


FAMILY


>Kara Tonir(mother) – a pure blood amestris, she is a normal alchemist
>Jian Stonebrood(father) – half xingese, half cretan, he is a statealchemist
>Samantha(Sam) Stonebrood(twin sister) – lived with their father so she wears his name
>Phillipp(Phil) Stonebrood(younger brother) – he is born after Kara and Jian marry again(this is when Nico and Sam are 23)
> Jie Yao(engaged to him when she is 19 during FMA takes place) – his family is from Xing
>Shin Yao(Son) – he will be born when Nico is 25

PERSONALITY

Likes:

» Reading, cooking, going for a walk, playing with children, dancing, pretending she is somebody else
» Roses, black coffee, cute things, the colour red, tea
» tall man, spending time with her family and friends, small animals, gentleman
» warm weather, sweets, wide fields


Dislikes:

» loud places or people, being ignored, when the military wants her to become a statealchemist
» rainy days, mountains, cats, the colours pink and baby blue
» pain, her left eye, being surrounded by a big group, people who ask her about her alchemy
» liars, man in uniform, sports


Fears: She is afraid of being alone in the dark, fears to fall, is afraid of the unknown and “the truth”(she never has seen it but she had heard stories about it e.g. from Ed)
Hobbies: reading, cooking, meeting her friend and drinks some tea or coffee with them, travelling
Dreams: She wants to see the world, she wants to travel and write everything down she sees. Another dream of her is, to find a way to help people with her alchemy without being a part of the army

Flaws:

-She is a perfectionist
-She is a daydreamer
-She is stubborn and headstrong
-She is quite smart, sometimes to smart for the people around and she hurts them because she calls them dump and so on
-Sometimes she is a “Gefühlslegasteniker” (I do not know the English word, sorry)

ABILITIES


»Basic Alchemy
-Her mother tough it to her
»Soul Alchemy
-Actually it was her fathers study, but she took it over and now also is studying it

A PART OF HER STORY

She is the younger one of the twins of Kara and Jian Stonebrood(they were married back then).

A few months after Sam and Nico were born Kara and Jian divorced and Jian took Sam with him to Central City, Nico stayed with her mother in Senna

When Nico was 12 her mother started to teach alchemy to her

A few months later, Jian came and gave Sam to Kara, because of a reason he never told Kara – the reason was that he had to run away from the army, because of his soul alchemy

with 14 Nico got sore brand(in german it is Wundbrand) and because their mother had no money to pay the hospital and the doctors, it got worse. Later they had to amputate Nicos right arm and her left hand.

One year Later Jian got that to known and he wrote a letter in witch was written, that Kara should got so Rush Valley with Nico and there they shoudl give her an Automail, Jian will pay everything, so they did that – Nico got her first Automail from the father of her later best friend Jenny Smiths.

With 16 Nico started to study the Soul alchemy of ther father, because Jian left soem of his self written books at Karas House, that was also the time when Nico started to study at the universty


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(c)Nicole Tonir -
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Comments: 16

denismain [2017-11-06 16:19:53 +0000 UTC]

what's sol alchemy i think it sound cool

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SkarrDWar [2013-09-09 21:52:04 +0000 UTC]

deine OC sind einfach der Hammer^^

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Kasu-Cat In reply to SkarrDWar [2013-09-09 21:52:40 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, dankeschön^^

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SkarrDWar In reply to Kasu-Cat [2013-09-09 21:53:19 +0000 UTC]

bitte^^

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LullabyDance [2013-07-22 13:32:27 +0000 UTC]

ich mag sie *-* sie sieht toll aus! aber warum mag sie ihr linkes Auge nicht? jedenfalls, ist sie wirklich hübsch

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Kasu-Cat In reply to LullabyDance [2013-07-22 19:06:38 +0000 UTC]

Danke^^
Na also sie mag es nicht weil sie auf dem linken Auge nicht wirklich was sieht, hat eine sehschwäche

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LullabyDance In reply to Kasu-Cat [2013-07-22 19:16:47 +0000 UTC]

bitte^^
ah, verstehe

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SugarplumTits [2013-07-19 23:51:56 +0000 UTC]

Now that she has a bio, would you like us to submit this to one of the critique folders? o3o (Be brutal, moderate, or gentle.)

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Hyllia14 [2013-07-16 18:05:44 +0000 UTC]

My naaaaaaame....

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Kasu-Cat In reply to Hyllia14 [2013-07-16 18:42:06 +0000 UTC]

Hehe

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Hyllia14 In reply to Kasu-Cat [2013-07-18 01:30:45 +0000 UTC]

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Casadriss [2013-07-16 17:46:07 +0000 UTC]

Hm, I think her outfit looks too similar to Ed's outfit. 

I was surprised that it's new style. I can't say that it's very original design, but - Your Choice.

Maybe you should think about alternative colors? Changes are always better.

And she even has an automail. I have to wait for her bio but I'm curious why she has it...

And these belts on her left arm. What is it? Is it practical? Or maybe just decoration?

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Kasu-Cat In reply to Casadriss [2013-07-16 18:22:27 +0000 UTC]

Just decoration, and actually she is not wearing this jacket, she just wears it in the beginning
And I wrote that I tried to change her colors but she just did not looked like herself with other colors, so I kept them
The thing with the automail I am chnging but in her past story she had them because they had to take of her arm and hand because of an gas exlosion, she lived in an really old house, but know I am changing her whole story so I thing of also changing this..
but still this is my OC and I design her like I want her to be, I know that black and red are Eds colors, but well I designed her with this colors when I first made her(back i...well 2008 I think...) and I kind of really like it and yeah...

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HeroOfTengoku7K [2013-07-15 14:00:18 +0000 UTC]

Cool
I love her jacket

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Kasu-Cat In reply to HeroOfTengoku7K [2013-07-15 19:56:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you^^

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HeroOfTengoku7K In reply to Kasu-Cat [2013-07-15 19:56:43 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure

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