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kasai In reply to BrimstarART [2019-04-27 07:46:02 +0000 UTC]

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BrimstarART In reply to kasai [2019-04-28 05:42:12 +0000 UTC]

Let me rephrase.Both halves are drawn excellently but you're contorting the body to the point where it isn't practical. The entire composition looks very awkward when put together and not balanced. To keep that balance I suggest trying to line up whatever foot that has the most weight on with the head, that way no matter how dynamic you're trying to make your pose it stays balanced. Even if that was done the 3/4 on the torso doesn't work anatomically with the spine.  (Not all poses apply to that rule but this one does very much so). Right now it isn't such but its a beautiful dynamic pose that you're trying to accomplish. Keep up the amazing work! 

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kasai In reply to BrimstarART [2019-05-03 04:43:32 +0000 UTC]

In the thumbnail, I believe it was a little more in tune, but got lost when I started drawing clothing over her. Her belly button moved more towards the viewer as I started drawing clothing. I need to be more conscience of clothing on figure. I sometimes have a bad habit of anatomy changing when drawing clothing over the figure.
Thank you for the comments!

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