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Published: 2013-11-17 14:57:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 665; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 2
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I'm so slow ;_; I need to work harder
anyways, page 3, enjoy~~
I will upload the next page(s) next sunday
critique is very welcome, because I'm still learning, critique can be about my english, the drawings, the story or anything else.
the whole manga will be made traditionally with a pen and ink, after that I will color it with watercolors and upload it.
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This is actually looking pretty good so far. One thing I would just say though is that the anatomy is a bit iffy here and there. (like in panel three, Hiroshi's head is way too tall.) I know it's extremely difficult to remain consistent whilst drawing so much, but I think it might be a good idea just to take a little extra time before colouring to make sure everything looks spot on. Fans will appreciate the fact that you are taking longer to make your work look better.
Good work.
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yes, I see what you mean, thanks a lot, I will keep this in mind from now on
I want to be so much better at everything, and I think I understand the basics, but I still make many mistakes.
every bit of help is appreciated
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The only critique I can give is to make sure not to add color next to a spot that hasn't dried yet. It will keep the colors from bleeding out from where you want them. Don't worry. The pots are very small.
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I use pretty cheap paper, so the colors bleed easily, but thanks anyway,
I'll wait a little longer in the future~
thanks a lot
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No problem and thank you for the
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Take your time. You know if you try to hurry things they might not come out well 
And also the last panel seems to have a few mistakes, like the arm position, etc~ but I guess arms can be hard.
Youre doing great so far
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I do try to finish pages weeks before I actually upload them, so if I'm busy, I'll still be able to upload a page every week
arms, hands, feet and perspective are the hardest things to draw
and Amaya's arm may seem weird, but she's still handcuffed and I guess hugging someone while handcuffed isn't very comfortable...
thanks a lot~~
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