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KannaAsa — Watermelon
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Published: 2019-11-01 07:51:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 2123; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 2
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Finaly!Wanted to submit this yesterday, bu DA was beeing a Bitch again!
Here we have them having their first conversation and they are actually gettin along, yet Envy still wont spill the beans.
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First of all, as someone who's BUG on theater and film stuff, I really appreciate the "watermelon" reference ewe
Anyway! Love the next installment of the comic >u< And, of course the interaction between Amy and Envy (or "unnamed Solider"? I think he is at this point, but we all know it's our favorite palm tree in disguise ewe). Speaking of the interaction... and this is the only issue I have with the comic, in Panel 9, it was confusing with which order the dialogue comes in. Based on what I can remember from your other comics in the story, chat bubbles (if writing in a Western Comic style) are formatted to be read from left to right, but also, top to bottom. So, while reading the 9th panel (when Amy was describing the characteristics based on the observation of the other soldiers), it was difficult to tell where Envy's part was supposed to come in between her comments...
Other than that, awesome job as always, Kanna ^u^ the interaction and chemistry between Soldier!Envy and Amy is nice and dynamic; and realistic too, since, based on the last panel, she'd skeptical of him as well.
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Well, i somehow do the Japanese order "right to left" subconciously. I cant help it, even back when i still made the HTTYD Comic i stardet doing it the Western way and ended up changing middway and didnt notice until it was already uploaded. So Sorry if i confused you ❤️
I did give Envy's Soldier disguise a Name. In my head canon, this Person is not a copy but an original made by Envy and he would proudly give it a name too : Scorcher
(In my favorite Fanfiction his Name was Striker, which Sounds cooler, but i feelt like that would be stealing)
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No worries, Kanna ^u^ I haven't read comics in a while (both Western and manga... |D). So, I can't say that I'm a pro when it comes to any tips or advice 
I also like the Headcanon of Envy's disguise being original! ^u^ I support that 100%~ ^u^ Especially since the soldier, who Envy bases his disguise on, doesn't make an appearance in the series. (Or, does he? It's been a while since I watched Brotherhood, so I might have forgotten if he did
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No, your right. That disguise is an Anime - only Thing and no one Besides Envy has that look.
The Fanfiction is called "Phylacteri" by Shade40 and is puplished on Fanfiction.net
There is some amazing FanArt in my Favorit folder "Envied Collection" But it is burried deep down, it would Take a while to find it... But i can link it to you once I've found it
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at first i thought the title to this page was like, the title equivalent of a shitpost.
i was not disappointing
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oh mah lord! Also, I just love how they started "Watermelon, watermelon" x3
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Thanky^^
I saw that in a JaidenAnimations Video, were they on a Reality Show and had to act natural in the Background, so they just went "Watermelon" XD
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Nice to see them get along ok
Also glad you got to post something
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