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Kalilea-Eucharista β€” Contest Submission: Zelink Kid
Published: 2008-05-21 06:56:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 3408; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 10
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Description Zelda and Link both watched from the base of a deku tree as their little son, now aged two, was running around after the fairies that fluttered about his head. The light cast by the ethereal creatures reflected off of his deep golden locks, messy and unkempt as a child's hair would be. Zelda made a mental note that it was bath time for the little boy as soon as the sun set.

"Don't wander off too far, Kail," Link called after the child.

Kail turned, and his sky blue eyes lit up as he beheld his father. It was times like these that reminded Zelda of the striking resemblance he bore to Link. She could only imagine what he would look like as he grew in the years to come. "Papa!" he cried gleefully, running towards his father, arms outstretched. He launched himself at Link, who took the impact with as much grace as he could, laughing freely.

Link stood, and brought the child up to his shoulders, so that Kail was now higher up. The two year old shrieked with joy: he loved it when his father walked with him like this. Zelda smiled, and closed her eyes, listening to the half-discernable gibberish Kail was babbling and Link's chuckles mingle with the sounds of the forest.

"Well, I'll be," a voice from her left said in a slightly surprised voice. "That little dork looks more and more like Link with every passing day."

"Roy, you saw him yesterday," another voice laughed, this one more feminine.

"That's why I said 'with every passing day'."

Zelda could easily recognize the two speakers, but she was completely unprepared for the third.

"Lest you slip up and accidentally say 'with every passing second'." This voice, too, she recognized. Her eyes fluttered open.

Link and Kail were both facing the three new arrivals. "Roy, Elice, Marth, come by to say hello?" he said, as lightly as he could. He had no grudge against them, not anymore, but some things were hard to forget and harder to forgive.

He lifted his son off his shoulders so he could greet his honorary aunt and uncles. The blonde toddler ran first to Roy, who scooped him up with a robust laugh. "Hey there, little dork," he said with a broad smile.

"Roy!" Kail screeched happily, poking the young man in the nose.

"Would you look at that." He turned to Marth smugly. "He gets my name right, but he always manages to screw up yours."

Marth, the oldest of the group, scowled at the younger Roy. "That's because your name is only three letters and happens to be fairly easy toβ€”"

"MARF!" the child shouted excitedly. Roy and Link exploded into laughter at Marth's expense, while Elice and Zelda giggled. He was passed to the blue-haired man, who was promptly subjected to a thorough bit of hair-pulling. If anything, Kail was fascinated by Marth and Elice's hair. He'd never seen anyone else with blue hair, and his parents and Roy didn't have it.

"Fay!" Kail bounced, pointing at the fairies. Marth grimaced.

"Uh, here, Zelda." He passed the boy to her. "He wants to go look at the fairies."

"I'm not kidding, Link," Roy was saying as Elice and Zelda went with Kail to look at the fairies. "That kid looks just like you. It's actually a little scary."

Link beamed. "Give him time. I actually think that he'll act a little more like Zelda when he gets older. I was never this loud as a kid, I don't think."

"Elice was like that. Father always said her volume was a sign of good health. Better lung capacity," Marth commented. "Of course, when we were little, I don't think a certain blockhead really helped."

Kail was running around after a bright ball of light that fluttered just out of reach, cackling merrily. Elice was hot on his tail, chasing after him. Finally, she caught up to him, and scooped him up. Kail shrieked, being at the mercy of Elice and her tickling.

"Then again, Kail seems to be a happy boy," Marth observed. "Maybe we didn't have enough happiness ourselves, so he tries to make up for that."

Kail came running back to Link, seeking refuge from Elice, who was the Tickle Mistress. "Papa!" he pleaded, hiding behind him. His little hands tugged at Link's tunic.

Link raised his eyebrows. "You want to go?" Kail nodded, and Link scooped him up. "Thanks for stopping by. I know Kail's going to miss you all," he said to the three.

Roy gave his characteristically cheeky grin. "You won't be rid of us that easily. We'll come back to visit. Or Elice and I will, at least, since a certain someone is about to become King," he added when he noticed Marth's quiet cough.

"Roy," the little boy said tiredly. "'Licey. Marf."

"Wave 'bye to King Marf," Roy said with a snort. Marth cuffed him on the shoulder.

Kail raised a hand and waved sleepily. His eyelids drooped along with his head, and soon he was sleeping on Link's shoulder. His hair fell across his face, a dark gold with the light of the disappearing sun gracing the locks.
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Comments: 56

GOZeldaXLink [2014-03-05 03:38:50 +0000 UTC]

I promised I wouldn't laugh when I saw "Marf!". Lets just say that I broke my promise.Β 

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Ro-your-boat [2012-09-22 18:01:22 +0000 UTC]

LOL! Marf! XD

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PrissyKissy [2012-01-06 04:43:48 +0000 UTC]

Okay, so how did I never see and comment on this, I thought I found the comment page and all of them! It's so cute and you really showed a bit of each character's personality.....and the part about Elice and her lung capacity made me giggle.....as did all the MARF!

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willblizz32 [2011-09-10 23:05:03 +0000 UTC]

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

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LinkyChuChu [2011-08-10 02:21:36 +0000 UTC]

This is really well done-I'm writing a fan fic of Zelda myself and I find this inspiring

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zelinkfan45 [2011-06-28 01:33:48 +0000 UTC]

awww this is so cute! zelink rocks

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DaisyWarrior [2010-03-20 03:34:19 +0000 UTC]

omg this is to cute β™₯

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BethStump [2008-10-14 23:14:41 +0000 UTC]

MARF! This was funny and I don't particularly enjoy Zelda fanfics! Good job! Its cute!

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Asuki2Hiroshi [2008-10-05 15:53:15 +0000 UTC]

This is so adorable! I love it! "Marf!!" that was cute!
Nice! Keep up the good work!

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ShadowedElf [2008-06-29 21:59:48 +0000 UTC]

XD Marf. I started laughing when I read that.

Cute story and I liked the name Kail for Link and Zelda's baby

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Kalilea-Eucharista In reply to ShadowedElf [2008-06-29 23:19:46 +0000 UTC]

Awww, thank you. *^__^* Keep your eyes peeled for more writing with Kail. ^_~

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ShadowedElf In reply to Kalilea-Eucharista [2008-06-30 01:16:37 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome That's awesome ^_^

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Black-Kat-55 [2008-06-21 09:15:50 +0000 UTC]

king marf!!!
that seriously made me CRACK UP.

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Kalilea-Eucharista In reply to Black-Kat-55 [2008-06-21 17:06:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. ^^

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Black-Kat-55 In reply to Kalilea-Eucharista [2008-06-21 17:29:04 +0000 UTC]


you're welcome!

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Prince-Autumnwind [2008-06-14 04:47:30 +0000 UTC]

Very well done...I died laughing when Kail pronounced Marth's name Marf and also laughed at the fairy part. Very funny and very cute.

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Anti-Nejiten [2008-06-11 01:41:52 +0000 UTC]

LOL XDD
I crached up when he yelled "MARF!"
Nice job <3

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grey-shadow-beliver [2008-06-07 06:18:44 +0000 UTC]

absolutely adorible

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Kalilea-Eucharista In reply to grey-shadow-beliver [2008-06-07 07:16:39 +0000 UTC]

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BurningBlazer [2008-06-03 23:42:37 +0000 UTC]

Awesome. I have great competition with you :3

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Kalilea-Eucharista In reply to BurningBlazer [2008-06-04 00:23:29 +0000 UTC]

Good luck!

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BurningBlazer In reply to Kalilea-Eucharista [2008-06-04 22:34:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! You too

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SakuraCherryChan [2008-05-27 19:40:40 +0000 UTC]

This made me all warm and fuzzy inside. It was so adorable and King Marf just totally made my day! XD

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Kalilea-Eucharista In reply to SakuraCherryChan [2008-05-28 02:05:30 +0000 UTC]

Awwww! Thanks! I'm glad it did!

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SakuraCherryChan In reply to Kalilea-Eucharista [2008-05-28 17:13:52 +0000 UTC]

haha no problem! i really enjoyed reading it, i wouldn't be surprised if u won! (by the way, i love ur avater pic! Marth rox or should i say "Marf"! )

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Kalilea-Eucharista In reply to SakuraCherryChan [2008-05-29 01:39:48 +0000 UTC]

If I won? I dunno, the contest is still on.

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SakuraCherryChan In reply to Kalilea-Eucharista [2008-05-29 03:21:30 +0000 UTC]

oops! haha oh well, i'll be rooting for u anyways!

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Kalilea-Eucharista In reply to SakuraCherryChan [2008-05-29 04:21:53 +0000 UTC]

Awww! Thank you!

I do hope to win, but if I don't, this was still fun anyway! ^^

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CallistoHime [2008-05-22 19:42:30 +0000 UTC]

I LOVED reading this! Honestly, I was so impressed by the way you captured each character's voice. VERY true to AtA. It warms my heart The character interaction was great and adorable. And, what can I say? I love MARF! and the fairy-fear reference You clever one, you! Licey- yes! Kail calls them all by Lauren and Mine's petnames XD Marfy, Licey, Zellie, Linky, Roylie LOL! Toooo cyute! I reaaaally enjoyed it. Fabulous contest entry and good luck!

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Kalilea-Eucharista In reply to CallistoHime [2008-05-23 01:45:54 +0000 UTC]

*bows*

Truth is, it was really really difficult. I wanted something fun and light, since it mostly centers around a little kid, but there are only a few light scenes in AtA. You had me scouring everywhere! The fairy-fear reference...it had to go in there, if there were fairies in the vicinity and Marth was, too.

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KikikatMainecoon [2008-05-22 02:29:14 +0000 UTC]

This is cute!
All hail, King Marf!!

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Kalilea-Eucharista In reply to KikikatMainecoon [2008-05-22 03:36:34 +0000 UTC]

All.
Hail.
King.
Marf.




*gives kudos for that.*

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biokinton [2008-05-22 02:01:51 +0000 UTC]

king marf haha that made me lol

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muffinonmeth [2008-05-21 22:13:36 +0000 UTC]

wow... this is.... great! It's simply adorable!! And really well written! And––and--so cute!!
haha, "Marf" never gets old XD sooo goood!!

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Kalilea-Eucharista In reply to muffinonmeth [2008-05-21 23:50:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Krazykat5216 [2008-05-21 18:58:17 +0000 UTC]



Marf. I absolutely love it.

Kind of reminds me of Nerf, though.

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Kalilea-Eucharista In reply to Krazykat5216 [2008-05-21 23:50:38 +0000 UTC]

Nerf? Didn't think about that...

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ORCA732 [2008-05-21 18:55:57 +0000 UTC]

Aww....he's so cute! ...Marf lol

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Kalilea-Eucharista In reply to ORCA732 [2008-05-21 23:51:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Shadow7Zerudahime [2008-05-21 18:21:31 +0000 UTC]

KAIL!!! Luv that...sounds cute, but serius at the same time...is that possible? ^^'
King Marf

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Kalilea-Eucharista In reply to Shadow7Zerudahime [2008-05-21 23:51:41 +0000 UTC]

I was seriously hoping I wasn't the only one who thought that was funny.

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Shadow7Zerudahime In reply to Kalilea-Eucharista [2008-05-23 18:05:28 +0000 UTC]

You're not the only one, believe me

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Kalilea-Eucharista In reply to Shadow7Zerudahime [2008-05-23 22:08:01 +0000 UTC]

Good to know!

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MushkiKizou-Art [2008-05-21 17:04:23 +0000 UTC]

This is so adorable!!! I absolutely loved reading this! I also love his name too! Kail. And the way he says 'Marf'!! thats my favorite!! King Marf!!!

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Kalilea-Eucharista In reply to MushkiKizou-Art [2008-05-21 23:53:02 +0000 UTC]

That seems to be the popular consensus. "King Marf" is very popular.

I personally also like 'Licey (lee-see) for Elice. It's really sweet.

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MushkiKizou-Art In reply to Kalilea-Eucharista [2008-05-22 00:05:02 +0000 UTC]

I like Licey also, but Marf is what really got me to laugh! Brilliant work by the way! ^^

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Kalilea-Eucharista In reply to MushkiKizou-Art [2008-05-22 00:34:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

This is what happens when I can't sleep and I've had way too much soda. "Marf." I think that was the insomnia talking.

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MushkiKizou-Art In reply to Kalilea-Eucharista [2008-05-22 00:39:29 +0000 UTC]

XD funny. 'Welcome! ^^

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Savvy23 [2008-05-21 16:02:38 +0000 UTC]

Cute! I giggled much!

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Desteni [2008-05-21 12:39:39 +0000 UTC]

This makes me giggle. I love how he mispronounces Marth's name! it's great! very cute!

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