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Justanutanobody — Mai-Otome: War Torn
Published: 2006-04-30 18:58:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 1350; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 29
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Well, I finally completed the entire piece. I've been working on this one for awhile. It's two characters from the anime 'Mai-Otome.' I am yet to get any kind of feedback here at Deviantart, so please, Please, PLEASE feel free to comment and let me know how I can improve. Thanks!Related content
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hmmm....i don't think you have a problem with cging. 8D basic anatomy is fine too~!
Nina's arms seem a tad stiff and short (maybe abt the elbows..) Her left arm's facing us, so it should be slightly longer than the right (well, that's how I look at it ^^)
Arika's head looks as though it has been slightly sheared. adjusting the position of her cheek and jaw a lil outwards might just do the trick. and usually, try to prevent drawing hair that stick to the face.
good luck~! it's good that you strive to improve ^^
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Thanks for the feedback- very helpful!
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aaww very cute drawing!!!! ^___^
Arika and Nina.. hahaha
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