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i like roll to and ur right she turn out perfect good job
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awwwnnn!! this is adorable!!! the only thing i would recomend would be that the image looks a little flattend out with their head. Im still not sure if it is the way it is supposed to be or if i'm rihgt. But in genneral this is adorable
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Once again you've done a great job with your fan art. The only thing I could possible find wrong is that the lines don't seem a smooth as they normally are, don't connect at some point. Your coloring is great, and their expressions are wonderful.
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The expressions are nice! The outlining of your colored picture could be smoother, but your shading is nice! It also has a nice geometrical feel to it ^^ well done.
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what type of paper did you use? it looks ruvid? i can see the white of the paper, and i never like it kinda. also, the helm (?) of the guy looks highter in a part. Γ².Γ² otehr than this, i dont know what to say, i dont know the characters and i'm not into mangas 
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I used my sketching paper which is textured, so that's my you can see the white of the paper. Well the character has like a part of he helmet that meant to be higher.
Don't worry I didn't think you where being rude, Your just giving me constructive criticism to help me improve. Which I appreciate.
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Γ².Γ² serisouly? well, didnt know, never heard of these characters XD so, to me, it looked so weird
^_^ good, then
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