Comments: 14
Ludjia [2012-02-20 19:34:42 +0000 UTC]
I like the rough better as an art piece. Mostly unrelated, I think the lines below its feet in the left make it more stiff since the character looks like it is in a twisting motion rather than jumping straight up.
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OssiferousRex [2011-07-05 07:31:06 +0000 UTC]
Still think this is the best thing in your gallery- the picture as a whole, it looks great as a diptych and I wouldn't remove either.
And for what it's worth, this is one of only two furry illustrations I've seen that I'd want on a t-shirt and wouldn't feel ashamed of wearing in public, particularly the rough. Something to consider!
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DarcKnyt In reply to jonathanvair [2010-07-12 01:25:10 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I don't suggest something's wrong. Only that I don't see the problems in either. They're both excellent drawings and very dynamic and fun.
So I may not know art, but I know what I like. And I like your work.
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CBrengan [2010-07-10 05:10:25 +0000 UTC]
The one on the left is looking down while I get the impression in the left one that it's looking at me, it makes the pose seem more confrontational and dynamic then when the eyes are turned away. awesome job though!
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jonathanvair In reply to CBrengan [2010-07-10 05:44:40 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the compliment!
Did you mean the right one looks like it's looking at you?
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CBrengan In reply to jonathanvair [2010-07-10 06:17:37 +0000 UTC]
um...yes. Yes, I do mean right. That wasn't very clear, sorry!
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johansome [2010-07-10 04:29:54 +0000 UTC]
On his left, our right side, his back curve is shallower in the finished version. that may help. Also, the dark mass of his tail seems to de emphasize the dynamicism of his body. lightening it up may bring in the contrast there.
Idk, let me know if it works!
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jonathanvair In reply to johansome [2010-07-10 05:43:17 +0000 UTC]
Good eyes, Sunshine! Both very good points.
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saturn9calina [2010-07-10 03:18:07 +0000 UTC]
ah, i see why the left one looks slower. You smoothed out all of the rough lines, and all the energy went with it.
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jonathanvair In reply to saturn9calina [2010-07-10 05:41:17 +0000 UTC]
I added sharper edge to give some depth, but yes, you can't beat a rough sketch!
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