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JolsAriella β€” Once Upon a Time

Published: 2012-09-16 11:54:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 3020; Favourites: 99; Downloads: 0
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Description Once upon a time, in a land not too far away,
There lived a girl who was pale, short and a little too gray.
Always dressed in red and somewhat creepy,
She made even the sunniest of days seem gloomy.

Around humans she stuttered and was nervous,
They made her feel self conscious, anxious.
Oh she was naive and shy, they would say
Quite odd too, to her parent’s dismay.

She would sit for hours staring into nothing,
But in her mind her thoughts were racing.
In a hundred different worlds was where her mind dwelled,
In reality she stayed disinterested, withheld.

In her dreams she painted the sky dark gray-blue,
Roses black and violets too.
It was tenebrous and stormy,
Perfectly suited for her constant melancholy.

While she was contented with her own privacy,
People started getting peeved at her obsessive secrecy.
They demanded to know what she was hiding,
But she would not speak a word, defying.

The girl remained detached and silent,
But her thoughts bordered on getting violent.
Infuriated that people were becoming intrusive,
Because she preferred to lie low and elusive.

And there came a day where she vanished,
So suddenly everyone was astonished.
She was never heard from again, never found,
Everyone assumed she might have died and drowned.

But the girl was alive, still as enigmatic,
Or maybe even more and much less pragmatic.
Maybe she had lost all her sanity,
And the rest of her humanity.

But she was finally where she desired.
In her Wonderland, she was inspired,
There she would live forever,
With no one to disturb her ever.

In her desolation she drew, painted and wrote,
Not masterpieces or intelligent quotes,
But ludicrous poems and macabre drawings,
To satisfy her inner bizarre cravings.

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Comments: 19

marebitto [2013-05-10 20:52:38 +0000 UTC]

ok...you just have described me ,otherwise i am a bit cheeky and weird. This is a really good poem (and photo)

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Paul9Rhymes [2012-09-26 07:02:26 +0000 UTC]

Awesome, I like it!

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mangasockattack [2012-09-21 21:12:07 +0000 UTC]

Great work, as usual!

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Lariak [2012-09-18 18:10:12 +0000 UTC]

great, girl! but what kind of effect do you put on to look this younger?

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JolsAriella In reply to Lariak [2012-09-19 09:25:06 +0000 UTC]

I didn't actually do any effects for this one, it might be the outfit and the wide-eyed expression? I'm not sure but thank you!

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Lariak In reply to JolsAriella [2012-09-22 00:53:23 +0000 UTC]

so i guess you have stopped in time

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SoyKam [2012-09-17 04:16:24 +0000 UTC]

<3 love it

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JolsAriella In reply to SoyKam [2012-09-19 09:23:49 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Trop-Kawaii [2012-09-16 19:12:09 +0000 UTC]

Love this, gorgeous <3

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JolsAriella In reply to Trop-Kawaii [2012-09-19 09:23:41 +0000 UTC]

thanks <3<3

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fatheroftheserpent [2012-09-16 17:24:04 +0000 UTC]

bizzare and beautiful

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JolsAriella In reply to fatheroftheserpent [2012-09-19 09:23:35 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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MarioBuzz [2012-09-16 16:45:51 +0000 UTC]

I like it and I like the story. But I think the face is too green, other than that it's cool.

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JolsAriella In reply to MarioBuzz [2012-09-19 09:23:16 +0000 UTC]

ah! I get it I'll make some tweaks, thank you!

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MarioBuzz In reply to JolsAriella [2012-09-19 11:30:32 +0000 UTC]

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ShiokuRules [2012-09-16 15:21:32 +0000 UTC]

Oh my God I love the story/poem! Fits amazingly well with the photo

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JolsAriella In reply to ShiokuRules [2012-09-19 09:23:26 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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Al3xDk [2012-09-16 12:59:04 +0000 UTC]

Woah, awesome story o_o
At least it has a happy ending in some way
And the image is just sweet yet dark, i it!
Great job

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JolsAriella In reply to Al3xDk [2012-09-19 09:23:22 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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