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Published: 2017-11-18 01:06:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 547; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 0
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Another vapid excretion in the unending shitstorm that is my artwork for this comic.
Can you even tell what's happening? Do you care? Why am I even bothering?

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Comments: 18

Sanctuary99 [2018-04-22 16:59:27 +0000 UTC]

impressive details. i like the pencil artwork.

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JNRedmon In reply to Sanctuary99 [2018-04-24 23:23:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you; I'm flattered. I've seen a few of your pages - high-quality stuff.

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Sanctuary99 In reply to JNRedmon [2018-04-25 17:27:11 +0000 UTC]

You Have? Thanks. So am i.

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EJtheDemonKid [2017-12-26 12:20:49 +0000 UTC]

I like the details you put into this work! It shows the actions and the intensity of the people in it with the speed lines and shading 

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JNRedmon In reply to EJtheDemonKid [2017-12-30 19:36:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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EJtheDemonKid In reply to JNRedmon [2017-12-31 03:08:54 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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42Ly [2017-11-26 11:07:35 +0000 UTC]

You worry too much about your work for this comic. I'm not saying you shouldn't, it's right you have worries for it, but in an healty quantity. I think your problem is because you're not sure about the "too-much" free layout you have chosen for the comic. I think it works very well, I think you made a risky choice and you did and are doing a good work. 
Yes, it's distant from more classic method/layout, but you're navigating well with it.
Trust yourself a little more

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JNRedmon In reply to 42Ly [2017-11-27 05:57:10 +0000 UTC]

I can't trust myself. I dislike my own work too much, and it's hard to have confidence when you're trying something new.

That really was my goal with this comic - I wanted to do page layouts and composition that you don't really ever see in comic books. I still have a long way to go and haven't perfected it yet...at all...but it means a lot that this has worked for you. Thank you.

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42Ly In reply to JNRedmon [2017-12-01 00:59:54 +0000 UTC]

I'll repeat myself, you're doing a good job with these ideas for the layouts, so go on and don't worry too much. You're learing while you're drawing this comic, and you're doing good (:

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JNRedmon In reply to 42Ly [2017-12-03 07:36:52 +0000 UTC]

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EvolutionsVoid [2017-11-18 23:47:46 +0000 UTC]

I think this one is pretty easy to follow. Though the panels are differently shaped from the more common comic panels, this page can still be read top to bottom and left to right. I think it is fine!  

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JNRedmon In reply to EvolutionsVoid [2017-11-19 05:46:47 +0000 UTC]

Ok, that's a relief. Thanks.

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saturdaymorningproj [2017-11-18 15:42:39 +0000 UTC]

Seems like you're not very confident with your layout skills, it's done well mate, don't worry

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JNRedmon In reply to saturdaymorningproj [2017-11-19 05:46:36 +0000 UTC]

No, I'm not. At all.

Well, between the two of us, you're the expert, so I suppose I have to listen to you.

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saturdaymorningproj In reply to JNRedmon [2017-11-19 07:31:45 +0000 UTC]

Funny you say  so since I'm sure are doing much better job with layouts than I do xD

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JNRedmon In reply to saturdaymorningproj [2017-11-25 06:13:41 +0000 UTC]

Oh come on, that is not even remotely true. XD

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LadyKylin [2017-11-18 02:45:39 +0000 UTC]

Yes I can tell what's happening.

They're trying to get the heck out of there and it's not working out to well.

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JNRedmon In reply to LadyKylin [2017-11-19 05:46:06 +0000 UTC]

Ok, well, that makes me feel a bit better. Thanks.

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